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Andriabow
2009-03-09 . chapter 7
I really enjoyed the story this far and its well written
with two of my favorite fandoms. Please continue. Thanks
jpdt19
2008-11-20 . chapter 7
My admiration for this story cannot be measured in words.

It's superb, wonderfully original, brilliant fun. Please do carry on, it's such a good read!
bookmonkey786
2008-07-18 . chapter 7
looking forward to more of valen shocking the minbari
Cattibrie393
2008-06-10 . chapter 7
fun story.
Really looking forward to more.
JovianJeff
2008-05-28 . chapter 7
I love this! Great seeing Methos back on Earth, wonderful discussion with Catherine, the whole Kordar investigation is quite wonderfully involved, with Valen's talk with Susan making a great highlight for the chapter. Thank you for continuing this story!
johnlao2004
2008-05-27 . chapter 7
Not my favorite chapter. But overall it's consistent with the story line. You are a very gifted writer. You're story has multiple subplots and well develop dialogs. While reading your story, i can always get mental picture in my head. I'm mostly curious how you'll connect Methos and Valen story lines in the end.

Thanks again for an excellent fic.
Kateri1
2008-05-26 . chapter 7
Great chapter, and go Methos, the great clothes thief!
JovianJeff
2008-05-14 . chapter 6
Magnificient! What a great blend of character piece and action, actually action was only a fraction of it, but well told. Loved Methos' manipulation of the Watchers, a truly priceless set of scenes. Again great with Valen, seeing old friends, his guards trying to sneak around, and his meeting with John were all wonderful in their range and tone of scene. It really made the fight even more jarring (in a good way) as he went from serenity to someone his guard had get him to stop fighting. With the added taste of a great flashback sequence in the manner of any good Highlander story. Thank you for continuing this and glad the other chapters are due soon!
Kateri1
2008-05-13 . chapter 6
Great chapter
JovianJeff
2008-05-02 . chapter 5
This has been an incredible read. I can't thank you and your beta (and/or team) enough for this marvelously presented concept that has been a joy to read. I look forward to more and thank you for sharing this!
JovianJeff
2008-05-02 . chapter 4
OMG this is good! I loved the conversations between Valen and Methos as always, I hope the separation is a short one. Nice one with Cassandra and the encounter on the station. I loved how the Minbari react to Valen and like Jeff to me the station seemed more his than anyone else's. He's always been my favorite B5 commander. Thanks for another marvelous chapter!
JovianJeff
2008-05-02 . chapter 3
Magnificent! I find I like the Valen-Methos conversations the most. The wonderfully written passages about John were almost a distraction from the Immortal story I found myself falling in love with. How they fit into this verse is as amazing a read as their conversations with one another. Thank you for sharing this great story!
JovianJeff
2008-05-02 . chapter 2
I love this concept! Great chapter, from the title had me worried it would spend a bit too much time on tormenting said Immortals, but loved the surprise curve I read where the title of the chapter had nothing to do with what I expected and yet everthing to do with what I read. Nice pacing, good flow of character interactions. Thank you for writing and sharing this!
JovianJeff
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
OMG what a great concept! And pulled off very well. A smooth blending of premises that had me reading faster and faster as I dove deeper and deeper into this chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing this and I look forward to more!
Kateri1
2008-04-08 . chapter 5
Great chapter, eager for more. Hope that Methos doesn't hide for too long.
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