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A person 2008-07-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked the book, but what you wrote is gayness. Like actually gay. Go read the book again, THEY'RE NOT GAY, there like freakin 12
Dave the L's gal 2008-05-28 ch 17,	abusewhy must you make me come so close to tears? The epilogue was extremley sweet! But I don't think the children's story is that bad to tell a child...but I had a strange childhood...most kids don't have PG-13 movies as their favorite movie at age 2...
Luchs 2008-05-20 ch 17,	abuseThis was so... moving. For the first time in a long time, I actually cried for a fic. I actually had to take a break for a minute to clean my glasses and calm my sniffling. You're an amazing writer! Your characterizations were very good. I really didn't feel anything in particular towards Roger, but I can say that you certainly made me feel for Jack and Ralph. The plot progression was really nice and well done. The beginning was dragged out, but it gave the fic a sense of mundane, daily life. Towards the end, I like how the flow sped up and you managed to cram more and more events into such a tiny space, sounding off the hectic events. The ending was horrible from my fluffy girly heart point of view; but it was brilliant from my literary mind's point of view. The destruction of one of the heroes, and not just the villain, was very real. I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE EPILOGUE! That is SUCH a cute idea. I especially love the beginning, when Ralph says he understands the boys' change at night. Thank you for writing this great piece of work! Your story is the first multi-chaptered fic I've read for this fandom, and I'm really happy my first one was yours. It sets up a little pier of expectations for the rest of the fics on here, :P. All the above in a nutshell: great work!
fruitscandii 2008-05-17 ch 16,	abuseOK. I'm reviewing in the wrong order...I just had to say, when Ralph was like, "you're too human" I was like. Yes. Exactly. Exactly. I feel like crying. Your writing is too beautiful...it actually inspired me to write Jack/Ralph fic... goes off to re-read.
Lorna Badeau 2008-05-15 ch 17,	abuseLOVELY i was reading this out loud to myself in an englihs accent. sounds really awesome in that way. haha my favorite thing in the story, which I thought was a very good way of putting him/them in it, was that good angel disguised as a dark one. That was Samneric right? If so, YAY! if not, I will continue to think of it as so. This was so wonderful, but of course, all good things must eventually come to an end. Beautiful, and I hope to see more works from you!
fruitscandii 2008-05-15 ch 17,	abusewhoa. I'm actually not really big on Jack/Ralph but this fic just completely sucked me into the ship. Your writing is just pure awesomeness--there were really really really small grammatical things but the structure and everything is just pure awesomeness. favoriting :)
Rianne - ennaiR 2008-05-14 ch 16,	abuseThis was one of the best fanfics I've ever read. -drool- I had to fight not to cry when Jack died (I'm in school :P), and it was just that awesome! It's sad that Jack died, but it was also the only real way it could've ended. Your writing style is beautiful, better than Golding's... well, just about. Beautiful work, my friend. Watari wa ai temae! ((Finally I remembered the female 'I'. ^^))
Rianne - ennaiR 2008-05-12 ch 12,	abuseAwesome. I'm falling in love with this story! This isn't rushed at all- and it's so kawaii! I love the song, too, I'm making up a tune for it as I don't know it myself. ^^ Arigatou gozaimasu, for this, Watashi wa* ai temae :P (*Yeah, I know, male version, but I think of myself more like a guy than a girl :P) Fun quote of the day: "I don't date gay guys." -Me
StarLove18 2008-05-05 ch 16,	abuseI was brought to tears at the end of this chapter. I guess all good things must come to an end. Poor Jack...JACK! Why him? I felt Ralph's pain in those moments because of the way you described it. Sweet story overall. I loved all the imagery you used, especially in the last few chapters. It makes me feel like getting back on the island myself. Great job! Looking forward to your future fics! ^^
Junester888 2008-05-01 ch 16,	abusewow...WOW. this was one of the best LOTF fick I've read srsly this was a good story despite Jack's death[which was so sad :( ]
Princess Star-Noble 2008-05-01 ch 16,	abuseNo! Jack why did you have to die! This was a very good story though. I cried reading this chapter.
A Forgotten Lover 2008-05-01 ch 16,	abuseOMG Ok, well I've gone back to despising ROGER, not you. This was really good, and very very VERY well written. Twists are absolutly fine with me, even horrible twists like these. I liked how you kinda kept some of the things annonymous, like you kept calling Roger the 'thing' or 'the hump'. Wonderful. Well, I wish you the best of luck!
Junester888 2008-04-26 ch 15,	abusewow cliffhanger =O once again can't wait for the next chapter(or final chapter lol) seriouslah :]
EienKohaku 2008-04-25 ch 15,	abuseO whats goonna haappeenn e i have the chills! (i hope jack and ralph dont die! ^^) haha id cry excited for ur next update! Ja Ne!
Junester888 2008-04-14 ch 14,	abuseinteresting...very very intertesting can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

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