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i like the ending too! its sweet but not puke-worthy over-the-top sweet. awesome!

This is a very sweet and original take on a classic idea. It's well-written, too. It's very much an "Eep" fic. So cute!Very nice job.

XxRunThroughIt

that last part was SWET

i love your lolivers!

So cute! Aww! Love how this ended. Loliver is totally growing on me.

i eep'ed! :P

awesome! i love Oliver in this! kind of funny in a cute way! :)

xx

Cute story!

This may have been one of the cutest stories I've ever read.

Have I ever mentioned how ORIGINAL YOU ARE?

Well done!

I really did like this, you wrote it well.

ep! SO CUTE! are u going to keep going with it? I think you should and lilly and oliver start miss kia and mr. idk? that would be so cute!

LOLIVER TO THE X-treme!

That was insanely awesome. :)

Camy, my friend... you. just. blew. my. mind. that was like so incredibly awesome i can't even believe it. everything was...perfect. it was funny and cute... and VERY well written and interesting and creative... i actually thought that oliver was going to write to miss kia and say that he liked his best friend. (which would be the boring, common, totally expected thing to do) you totally surprised me in an incredibly awesome way. i just luv it. :) like you don't even know. you had me on the edge of my seat... my eyes were wide and a huge grin was spread across my face the entire time. everytime i read a line i thought "man, that line was perfect". seriously. the words just flowed without any difficulty reading it. from the very beginning you actually had me STEAMING with jealousy that i didn't write this. haha. is that conceited? i swear, i was like "man, i wish i wrote this so bad". lol. definately, by far, the best story you've ever written. maybe even the best i've ever read. at least in a very long time. and btw, this is the longest review i've ever written, so you know this is good. ;) keep on writing or prepare to be cyberly hit with tomatoes on colorful friends. :D luv ya.

-Andrea-

heey! I think that was really really cute!

Lilly as Miss Kia? so lovely!

really love it,

aww...cute!

aw cute!