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Reviews for: Dreaming of Forever
IVIaedhros
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Ironic that these two so often make for a better story when she's dead.
dakota423
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
*sniffle* aw... Bittersweet, like all of your fics, i suppose. But i guess for our characters, it can't be any other way...

I have a question for you, or more a proposal. I'm stuck on two of my fics, both TSCC, and i was wondering if you could offer up some suggestions for either of them. Its "Break" and "Solace". I don't know how much of "Break" you actually read, but I've hit a plothole. And "Solace"... well, you'd have to read "A Fighting Chance" before you read "Solace", but I'm stuck on where to go next. You've always been very helpful and supportive; I'd be forever grateful for some constructive feedback!

Again, this fic was spectacular. You're such a great visual writer!
Collective Memory
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
It was so beautiful i could cry... "Lightly he kissed the ribbon on his finger, and in that moment Cloud knew he could never take it off. Tears still poured from his eyes, but they were different now; a strange peace had come over him and he smiled even through the pain that threatened to tear him apart. Even if the rest of his days were spent waiting for that single moment when dreams and reality could coexist, even if the rest of his life were spent longing for the twilight, it would all be worth it. Aerith had never left him, and even if they had to dream of their forever, it would always be there, waiting just beyond the horizon."

my God you write beautifully each word every sentence I could feel the emotion your words were so vivid and tangible it brought tears 2 my eyes i swear maybe im getting a little 2 emotional here lol but dude u write 4rm the heart tragedy at its finest such beauty thank u ps i was hooked the instant i read the tittle and summary i have become inspired :)
Alantie Mistaniu
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
O_O *eyes flood with tears* You, sir, are becoming a master of weaving fluff with angst into a perfect bittersweet mix. I love the ribbon around his finger, the only hint that she was truly there with him. . . And Cid giving her away is truly awesome. I adored it- one of your best yet, I believe! *gives you a huge basket of Clerith cookies and potions*
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