...Wow!

...No Pulse?

A in ART! So it's been two years since? Hm

Woah. Great fan fic. O_O

This is REALLY good. I will read the sequel. ^_^

Plz hurry up to make the other story i can not wait any longer plz man hurry up will y a

yay!

Wow!
keep going!

i love your story very very much and i think you are very talented at writing fictional stories. and i really would love it if you write your sequel and i really am excited for it too.
nadia :)

wow! awsome epic here! hitomi as a roya lheir huh? great plan!

I have only read two chapters, but I think that this story has great potential so far. The only thing I would comment on as being off is the eye color of Van and Dilandua; red and purple? But that's just me. Also, just thinking, but maybe you could revise some of the wording so it doesn't sound so awkward. But the idea and emotions are presented excellently. Great work and keep it up.

Oh...My..god! This is the most awesomest story i have ever read. you are by the best Escaflowne writer ever! I found it kinda funny how much you used 'Emeralds' and 'rubies' to describe their eyes through out the story. I will be reading your sequal and writing reviwes for every chapter but i liked this one so much i just wanted to do a end reveiw. I couldn't believe how many times i cried reading this story, you become so hooked on the plots and allmost become attached to the story like Van is to escaflowne. And was Escaflowne a real dragon or just kinda was 'alive' but still a guymelef?? That was a confusing part XP And guess what? You have givin me so much inspiration that i have started to draw different scene's of this story. If you would like to see them when i finish i would be honoured ^^ But the last one i will draw is the wedding scene, that one will take me the longest and will be my most anticipated work. Well i best get back to work! Now words can describe the wonder work you have done here. Im looking foreward to sitting down and reading the sequal!

@_@ i feel really dizzy, i can't believe i actually finished reading this in a day... anyways, gr8 story! keep up the good work!

i loved ur story.....its the best Escaflowne fanfiction that i have read yet.....i hope u write more!!!!

Hi WONDERFUL WRITER

ya... i know ur story is completed~ hhah n i'm reviewing in the middle of a completed story~ if dat dosen't sound weird to u~ it does to me~ HahA well... great writing... i must say u're an awesome writeR` and it'd be a pity if u didn't write some sort of book~

i definitely do plan to read the sequel after this~ HahaH keep writing~ u got da talent~ superb job!

I LOVE IT

its very good, has alot of action and mysterious stuff all in on:)