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MysteryLady-Tx 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, but part of me found it disturbing in parts and I'm not really sure WHY?!? LOL...I bet that makes perfect sense... THANKS:"D Great story
LadyMononoke756 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abusesorry, whose minato?
Antimatterannihilation 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abusenot bad, although the bird thing confused me like at the end naruto was a bird and minato died in the fire, but i could not tell if the whole time it was just a metaphore, but if it was it was pretty good. keep up the work
NoNoWriter 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseYagh, I dunno. Somehow I got the feeling that Kyuubi is not happy about being sealed inside Naruto and Minato just watches as Naruto suffers the consequences of his decisions. (when Naruto walked inside all bruised, he just sits there) And the cookies. XD I didn't get it at all but alas, we still have mental images! That he killed the man but since he was holding chocolate cookies it wasn't blood that got on his face. nods and moves on (Except that the image of Naruto licking yondaime is so cute!) Haa, Kyuubi is getting restless. So, Naruto might be in battle and the fox takes control! tries to associate it with the rest of the stroy ah, this is too hard for my brain! [When nine years had surrounded him] gosh, I love that! You and your unusual way of saying things. No, no, I'm so slow. (and that totally just rhymed.) I admit, I didn't quite get it. XD Or then I'm just too tired right now. Hmm, maybe I should let it bake inside my head.