Noc and NC 2008-07-25 . chapter 2"Lina takes all my money"
HaHA, she would, too. Best line I've read all week.
But in all seriousness, this was a really great story! Gourry mistaking Luna for Xellos was so in character! Lina's reaction to everything was hilarious and well written, and the slight romance hints every now and again ("where was her naked-excluding-toppings-Gourry?") were just awesome. The little chat about family was really something good to see! We never hear about any of his story in the anime (accept for that one movie- you know the one) and people here on ff rarely write with his past incorporated into the story. Luna's cool behavior was also excellent.
Once again, great story! |
Anna Nimmie Tee 2008-01-29 . chapter 1So does Gourry catch the cone or catch Lina? Or both? If caught, how much of the cone will be left when she wakes up? :)
I enjoyed the Luna-see in this fic immensely. All three of them and their thoughts were described so humorously and well. This was one of the best Luna meets Gourry stories. Flow and timing were very good.
I do hope this is more than a short. I'd love to see more interaction between the three as they travel together. On the other hand, leaving us wanting more is also not a bad thing. |