Lovely drabble. Very provacative. And I agree that Ritsu/Nagisa isn't that out there. She loves him... he probably doesn't love her, but he doesn't HATE her either.
It's too short. xDD !!
I'm all sitting here like " ;-; short..."
I like it but I don't think you really got into Soubi's character.
Other than that, it was..sad. xD
No, I liked it, really.