For a long time I got a bit bored of fanfic but I read your story, got hooked and now am raring to read a whole lot more fanfc's! So thank you! this story rocked!

Yayness

Hi, I just wanted to say that this is a REALLY good story, and I love it so far. There's this one tiny blooper at the beginning of "This Is No Normal Illness." It's not really a big deal, I just thought you might like to know, but why would Dumbledore be asking the Transfiguration teacher to give the students permission to use the Restricted Section. After all, he's Headmaster and I would hope that Madam Pince would accept his word. I'm not trying to flame or hassle you with every nitpick, I just thought you ought to know :) (ah! I'm nose-less!)

DID IT AGAIN! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

FUNNY, HUH! I'M REVIEWING A PAGE YOU SAID DON'T REVIEW!

Hmm... This is only a short review (for me) as I'm supposedly doing homework... And really should be, considering the fact that I'm getting further and further behind with each second... Yet your fan fictions are *much* more important! Even if my teachers don't think so...

Anyway, just to satisfy my curiosity, I was wondering if you have read the "Wild Magic" books by Tamora Pierce, as some of this story just seems a little too similar for me to consider as simple coincidence. Not that I mind - I think that having Sirius as a Cargen is a great idea - but just that I'm curious. If you have read them, then did you enjoy the stories? I have to say that I did, they're one of my fav quartets.

Oh, and I was also wondering if you have rewritten this piece, or if you've just changed the layout a bit... I don't really know myself as I was given a printed off version of all your hp stories from a friend of mine (Ariqua on ) and have never actually read them off the internet...

And this review has become longer than I expected. I don't know what it is about me, but as soon as I start writing a review or email or something I just keep writing for ages - whatever drifts into my head! And thankyou for the review, by the way, I'm glad you enjoyed Lily Love. Have you read the stories that follow? I have to say that I think the quality of my writing improves somewhat as they progress...

And now I'm speaking about my self in *your* review! Enough of that! I love your stories and will keep reading them, even if I do have to go over to fiction alley. I myself am already there, under the name wildcat ohrya once again, though what I have posted is what I have managed to edit of my stories...

Grr!

I love your style, humour and the maturity of your writing. So many fan fiction authors write in such childish manners that I can't stand it! Your writing shows much promise and imagination. If you ever get an original work out in to the stores, tell me please!

Keep writing - if only for me!

wildcatohrya

This story is good and funny but um...isn't James the seeker on his quitich team?

:D yay! excellent, full of plot and very funny. I just love your incarnation of Sirius (hence why I nearly stole him... poo, I haven't finished that chapter of ADI yet...)

Holly... lol. Myrtle... lol! and she's a Cargen! :D Sirius pretending to be James' mother... I'd like to hear more about the WMI though.

:D:D:D:D:D:D The Prankster War was great, and I'm glad that the Marauders won! I think my favourite bit was when Sirius dressed up as Trelawney - LOL! hehehe... Snape turned into a turkey... That was great. very cool. Now I must get on and finish reading WMI!

Hey there! um... the reason you haven't seen my review is because I haven't yet *blush* (I haven't finished reading yet...). Anyway, I will now review 'Live Free or Die' to stop you from killing me ;) (I'm halfway through WMI).

I like it! It's fluent and funny, and I love your version of Sirius's past. I like the Cargen thing and the animals are great :)

shoot, u didn't *say* not 2 review this one! that's right, me again! i'm gonna go look for ur next story now, so

Snowfaries Lions,

Zoiy Grockle

another review 2 annoy u (why r u bothering 2 read this?)

just thought i'd be anoying go back review all the pages u said *not* 2!

IT'S ANOTHER GIRL! I like that name alot better! (but i might be biasd, it's my best friends name, u know, the vampire?) Oh, and u can 2 make jokes out of it, we call her Mistle-toe all the time!

IT'S A GIRL! sorry, anybody i just spoiled that for. Why, oh WHY did u have to name her Myrtle?

P.S. Don't blame me for reviewing every chappie! ur the one who keeps telling me to!