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| Mr.Dump 2008-08-10 ch 1,  | abuse2 much typeo's u shud read sum of /u/1593269/ storys... anywayz it wuz pretty gud |
| Tha Kalligrapha 2008-02-13 ch 3, | abuseA fittingly abrupt conclusion. You've done it, my man! My only complaints: Daffy more than likely wouldn't live in a secluded spot like that; he's an attention-hound. Also, I think you could've done more to point out what the actual collar was - that being the little white ring around his neck, of course. Nicely done all around. Clear, concise, well-executed. Not destroyed or aborted one bit. Plus you've given life to this section, which is so full of bullshit. |
| Maverick87 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseSilly Daffy! Just keep releasing people from their worldly restraints! I like the murderous confusion you bring here. It's crazy but awesome. And this line made me laugh pretty hard: "I feel trashed; I feel like Lola did. Hah. That’s not funny at all." Was funny to me. Super funny. I really want to see how this story develops. Marvin the Martian controlling him? Just a guess, and I'll have to wait and see. |
| Tha Kalligrapha 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseBugs' vengeance plot is irritating to me, obviously, but in the last section you took this exactly where I was hoping you would. |
| Maverick87 2008-02-01 ch 2, | abuseOh...so it was Daffy with the killings... It is not making any sense yet, but this story is like a spider web and you've barely starting weaving, so I'll shut up and keep waiting for the surprises. Keep it up though. Not like you should listen to me on ACTUALLY GETTING THINGS DONE. |
| Maverick87 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Bugs is freaking crazy. "Overexaggerated" is an understatement here. Daffy better get out of there. Bugs=Psychopath Of course this said "Chapter 1" so that means...more to come! Sweet. Now all I have to do is get my lazy self into gear... |
| Tha Kalligrapha 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm drowning in joy as we speak. |