 Pyro Lady 2008-02-06 . chapter 1Loved the fic (finnally got around to review :P)
Anyways your take on Amyro is pretty much what I think aswell. John would only love Amara for her powers, together he would be the dominant personallity and considering how he is it might not be a good idea.
As for the Jonda I loved it. I loved how you described Wanda too, it was perfect.
I can't wait for another great one shot by you.
Lots of love
Anna |
 Goldylokz 2008-02-02 . chapter 1I loved all the fire analogies. They were very appropriate and made the piece flow rather nicely.
I still don't buy Amyro as a working relationship, but I can understand the obsession. And what is love but obsession? |
 roguishcharm 2008-01-30 . chapter 1wow, this was really well written, and i loved it everything about it. you could see how obsessed and passionate he is with fire, and how his life seems to revolve around it, because of how he describes the girls, who are extreme opposites, but have the one thing that john craves. great job, and again i loved it. |
 TWbasketcase 2008-01-29 . chapter 1'Ey even though I hate Amyro with a passion, this was still a good realistic view. No insane basket case John, instead, just contemplative and I like that. It's not done enough, and it's something new that still fits his character.
Personality wise I NEVER understood Amyro. She would hate him! *DIES* But I liked that you added in the physical aspect of what would be a relationship with Amara. It was very twisted in the sense that he thought of forcing and bending her to his will, but still very true -- once again.
Anyhow, nice little piece of work. Sometimes I'm so not even used to reading your other than X-Force things anymore *DIES* Oh LJ has tainted my mind... ;P
Kristen |
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