please please update this is an extremely well written story. also Ichigo from Bleach and Riku from Kingdom Hearts? nice way to add them in though. and to finish this review update or i will summon kyuubi to come and attack you untill you do update

nice story cant wait for next chap

great story man i caint wait to read the rest of it!

Awesome

LOVE

love it can't wait for more

A good chapter. A very creative and intense deatk of Mizuki you did. I look forward to the next update.

Interesting story, from what the ending sounds like, either Mizuki's master is one of Lucifer's warrior people or the person in the trees is one of them

great chapter looking forward to more

this was an ok chapter, but i think the story can be better if you and more dialog.

update son

please update soon it's cool story!

GAY! Your a Sasgay lover I'm severely disappointed this story held promise sure your grammar isn't all that good, it's to fast paced, and your Naruto seemed far to weak in the fight if he was limited to mid Chuunin to low Jounin he'd have beaten him in seconds without even trying. Anyways I'm sad that the story took an instant turn towards suckville with that bit sorry for the flame but oh well I hate the emo prick.

Those two being gay was unneeded and not even very funny. Also it's to short. All these three chapters should be put together and you've got some good chapter length. Also I think he should be limited at High Jounin altogether as not to would hinder him to much if attacked unless it's quick and easy to lift the restrictions.

that was so good plz up-date soon