it's really nice to go into Edward's mind!
Congrats!

I liked the story, but I noticed you did it a bit different from the book. In the book he follows her to Angela first, etc... Very well written, though :D

That was awesome. I like your Edward's p.o.v.! =)

Aww! That was really sweet :)

Very nice. This sounded exactly like how I imagined Edward would be feeling.

loved ur version of edward! it was great

=D
Well...i was just going to add this to my favourites without reviewing...but then i read your note =P

This is really well-written! Hope to read more of your great work..

perfect! i always wondered what he thought, and if i hadnt found this, i might have writtne my own fanfic about it, but oyurs is undoubtedly better than anything mine would have been ;-) so, great job!

~luv2read134

i put this on my favorites, because it is ADORABLE! :D

that was preaty cool i loved it

Great insight! Love it :)

Your character writing is impeccable. I usually shy away from students that write because of their limited time, but I was taken in by all of your one-shots and now I will be a fan of yours for as long as you write 'twilight'.

Thank you.

Okay, when I first skimmed through the Twilight fics a bit ago it appeared that the majority were AU, and that's all good and well but I love these types of stories and you are quite an amazing writer, it feels like I'm reading the book.

I loved reading another one of yours from Edward's POV. You really have him down, I think anyways.

I loved how you went through this part of the story and showed how Edward had to be feeling. As I was reading it I could feel his angry and fear of what could happen to Bella.

Great job.

This is another of my favorite moments in the book - when Edward is so obviously jealous. I liked how you captured EPOV. I don't know that Stephanie herself could have done any better!

damn, you are GOOD.
It's so detailed, and really reflects on the emotions he was experiencing - i likee.
i hope you do more one-shots like this.
~purplecow1225