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killing u with umbrellas
2008-07-11
ch 29,
abusei liked these stories very much.
vanchagreen
2008-06-11
ch 29,
abuseVery good! Great series!
7Kyuubi7
2008-06-07
ch 14,
abuseIf Dumbledore did know, hypothetically, about Sirius, James and Peter's animagus forms wouldn't there have been more security for the school in Harry's third year? I mean he didn't know that Sirius was innocent until the end of the book. He thought Sirius was trying to kill Harry so naturally he would have done all he could to make sure that didn't happen.

Also Dumbledore may not like the ministry very much but I doubt he would ignore the law about unregistered animagi.

But I do understand why you did that... I was just pointing out why I don't think Dumbledore knew...

Okay you've probably had enough of me so I'll stop talking now... I mean typing...
7Kyuubi7
2008-06-06
ch 6,
abuseSo I understand the reasoning for making James a prefect, (cause he's head boy in the canon) but does it actually say in the books (or anywhere) that the head boy and girl had to have been prefects?
I'm just wondering here...

Anyway great reunion you had between the boys, very touching.
Nenifer121
2008-05-21
ch 29,
abuseWow.
I just had to tell you that I pulled an all nighter to read the entire collection of these stories. It was an incredible journey. I congratulate you. I had a uni exam i was supposed to be revising for and everything, but I just couldn't stop reading. 104 chapters one after another i read, bearly stopping to get food! It really is outstandingly written.

I loved the way you portrayed each character, I thought that was done well, though in the last book, I must say that Wormtail's character was developed very well, just enought to think that he wasn't quite as honest, or faithful to his friends as he let on. The pranks were great too, though, in all honestly (don't scold me) I was a little disapointed with the final two pranks. I can't help but feel that they should have had a lasting mark on Hogwarts, rather like Fred and George did with the swamp.

I look forward to reading more of your work, and congratulate you again.
ifyoujump
2008-05-18
ch 29,
abuseyay! this series was amazing!
elkcisnav
2008-05-14
ch 29,
abuseVery well written. And I nice prank idea at the end too, don't remember reading that one anywhere before. Keep up the good work, and I'll really miss waiting and waiting for new chapters to be posted to read. :P
SetTheTruthFree
2008-05-11
ch 29,
abuseI loved the entire story.
The way you wrote it, and i'm sad to see the end. but it was fantastic ^^
SWaddict1986
2008-05-10
ch 29,
abuse"James was spared being given a bouquet, only to have the girls from his team "take pity" on him and each spare a flower to put in his hair, which Remus kindly braided into a crown (the flowers, not the hair), garnering jokes, not only about James’ head adornment, but also about how Remus even knew how to braid."

HAHAHAHAHAHA oh I love it! I'm wondering how Remus knew how to braid too ;)


""Remember this: we are – all of us – wizards here." There was the barely hidden sound of scoffing that emanated from one side of the Great Hall. And while several pairs of eyes flickered in that direction, an unspoken agreement kept anyone from acknowledging it."

Well, at least the Slytherins were more quiet than usual. Ah Dumbledore, always trying to make people SEE & understand.



""They were supposed to be ferocious man-eaters," Sirius harrumphed, crossing his arms over his chest and making Gillette laugh.

"They’ve matured so much over the last seven years, haven’t they," she said teasingly to Lily, who also chuckled at the pouting Sirius."

L0L them? Mature? Nah!



"Remus muttered another incantation.

James prodded Sirius’ shoulder. "Here it comes."

The girls returned their focus to the lions and watched as they rose into the air, crouched simultaneously wherever they were, and then took off at a full run straight into each other. With a loud boom, the lions collided and exploded into a giant gold and red firework that sent sparkles fluttering lazily onto the heads of the rest of the student body, and for just a moment amidst the glitter, the words "The Marauders were here!" were visible hovering in the air."

Oh that is so awesome! Fred & George would LOVE that :D hehe oh that's really neat



"Having been their Head-of-House for seven years, and having doled out more detentions than she could count, she had a sneaky suspicion that this was not the final word from the boys. But a short time later, they rose from the table and left, and she had to concede that might be all there was. She found herself feeling strangely disappointed. It appeared she owed Slughorn ten Galleons and a drink at The Three Broomsticks"

*giggles insanely* Oh I love McGonagall. that is so great. I can see her & Slughorn betting each other something like that.

I love that you had the bit of what she was thinking. It's so McGonagall. Especially when she noticed the Marauders behaving sneaky.



"When the shifting ceased, everyone stared in awe at the Slytherins. The table had been divided into roughly four sections. In each section, the students sitting there now resembled one of the four Marauders, meaning that there were approximately fifteen Sirius look-alikes, fifteen Jameses, fifteen Remuses, and fifteen Peters."

:O oh. My. goodness. That is the greatest thing you could come up with! *dies from laughing so hard* that is hysterical I love it.


"As it turned out, due to the magical mishap at breakfast, this was the first year in the history of Hogwarts, that the scarlet steam engine was late in its departure. And the Marauders could not have been more proud."

NICE!


I hope you do get the "Book Three" out- good luck with that!

that was a really superb ending :D
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseoh gosh, it's over, it's done... the Marauders are finished school, I've got to tell you that is a lot more epic then when Harry Potter finishes school with his friends. rediculously more epic! I love the story so much, and that was the best possible ending line there could ever be!
I'm so happy that the story ends with Peter still a good guy, (even if you do finish up to the tragedies part, it will still be the 'end' here) I love the way they left school, brilliant job!
thank you so much for writing it!
MilyMB
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseOh my goodness. I'm so sad that this wonderful, wonderful story is over. At least for now. :D Your an amazing writer, and I really hope that it continues. But you captured the Marauders perfectly, created likeable OC's and always answered my reviews. Who could ask for more? Thank you for giving us all the pleasure of reading them. And I'm the 200th review for this story! Good Job!
Lots of Love
MilyMB
Kona-Lupe-101
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseaw!! i am going to so miss it!
Shiri Razi
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseYour story = LOVE
it will be so sad coming home and knowing i wont find a messege in my inbox telling me there is one more chapter, i cant wait for you to continue, but even if you dont, it was quite a lovly ending, cheers.
Hawkcat
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseAbsoluetly awesome! And yeah for McGonagal, I knew she liked the boys, no matter how strict she may seem. And the last sentence was absolutely perfect! Amazing, beautiful, and enertaining. Are you sure you aren't J.K. Rowling? :) I look forward to any other Harry Potter fanfics you write, hopefully with Sirius, as you write him so well! Kudos!
Decimare
2008-05-09
ch 29,
abuseThis made me want to cry. I can't believe it is over. I can't wait to see what else you might do though. Thank you for writing this.
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