can you please continue this fic? let say a bit fast forward and let Shizuru do her advances and works of having Natsuki as her bride to be? i love the chibi stuff all over the hime cast! it was fun to read.

thanks for this one.

Gambare.

hahaha... it was very cute... even if it was just a story... it would be great if you continue it... like an epiloge or something would be great...

I really love this fic of yours . cute ,sweet , with the touch of youthful innocence . I read this before , when I was still a lurker and couldn't help myself , so i endlessly searched for it just to re-read and comment XD much love though I really wish this would have a sequel or somethin' ^__~

that was... great. reckon i haven't stopped grinning or laughing myself silly ( the part where midori tells mai not to play with matches when there are witness ...seriously?!!) since starting to read the fic. And Nao's jealous! it's hilarious.

Great piece of work, could easily conjour a mental theatre, the setting and characters were well described =]

Kawaii!! Shizuru and Natsuki were so adorable in this!!

author-san where's the continuation?

Incredibly cute. I'm to tired to do a thorough review, but one problem that did stick out was Reito calling Mikoto "nee-chan"- this is actually a title reserved for older sisters. Instead, Reito should be calling her "imouto-chan."

Other than that, it's adorable, and I hope you add on to it. I'm sure there's plenty of potential for classroom craziness. Perhaps even Miss Maria as the teacher? She's a scary hardass, after all, and one of very few redeeming qualities for Otome...


Peace, Love, and all that other queerness,

R

zomg so adorable X3

i really love the stories when they are likkle babies X3 ...well more like toddlers but its still cute 8D

shizuru was soo adorable X3 it made me want to squeal XD;

i hope you write more 8D i look forward to it if you do X3

Aww that was so cute, especially Shiznat moments. Natsuki was all protective of Shizuru no wonder she wants to marry Natsuki. LOL Please continue this story 'til their adulthood.

i think you should continue this with one more chapter but have shiznat in there teenage years and have natuki and shizuru have a crush on each other

"The other girl, scared, held up her stuffed snake in front of her face and made it hiss using her own voice."

Oh.My.God. I can't take it, I just can't, I'm melting ! Melting into the pinky, fluffy form ! It's just...CUTE ! SHIZURU ! AW *sparkling eyes, hazy stare*

Your Shizuru - Number one on my list of most cute things in this ** world ;)

lol 'secret ninja' lol. 'i'll marry her.' also funny.

Ed

Lol Mai Hime the early years. It was cute good work :)

oh you could continue it ^^ or try it ^^ i really like it ^^ love it even xD so cute and sweet xD

Hahaha, I had the worst day today at work, and this made it A LOT better. It was adorable as hell and the dialogue was hysterical.

One of my favorite lines was--“What’s mayo?” asked Shizuru while poking at one.

Natsuki froze. This poor lost soul had never heard of mayonnaise before and the girl saw it as her duty to convert her to one of those who were addicted."--Priceless.

Excellent fic! It was also very well written. Thanks for making my day better.