Beautifully written, and the concept is really original. I really enjoyed it :)

OMG...that was breath taking...I never, ever read a story that was focused on Lenore like this one...it was simply beautiful!!

I am jealous at you for being such a good English writer!! I can never describe things so good like you do ^_^

Back to the fic: Athrun, I feel so sorry for him, for Patrick, for Lenore Herself :(
thnx for writing such a sad, yet beautiful one-shot.

simply beautiful.

Sad little story...
It's so painful...huh

Beautifully woven one-shot! Short yet so intense. You have a superb writing skill i like the way it was written in a mother's point of view... it doesn't even need to have a conversation just to portray the emotions between a mother and her son... everything was very well expressed. and yeah if only headstones could speak... they certainly have a lot to offer. I'd be glad to hear more from you ^.^

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Nya, too busy to sign in~ -cry- You don't have to make it so heart-wrenching!! -cries some more- It's so..perfect, written from Lenore's POV, poor Athrun. -sniffles this time- You have quite perfect English, and I like that very much. Death to all English manglers!!

Aw, so sad! It's really good! I like it! ^_^ It's very realistically portrayed, and I love the whole gravestone thing! I got great images out of this one! :D Good job!