 sand500 2009-08-23 . chapter 16ha ha
"And interfering with her plans got the death penalty. Or worse. The frying pan."
ha ha
"except for the kitchen sink in his luggage"
ha ha
"got them all with her weapon of mass destruction"
ha ha
dang this story is Funny!
seriously this is way lot funnier than "an ordinary family" |
 sand500 2009-08-23 . chapter 15ha ha... steel table... ha ha XD |
 sand500 2009-08-23 . chapter 14aww darn it... now i cant flame you...
(lol. dotn flame my flames unless it makes you fell better of something...) |
 xXoTaInTeD-bLoSsOmoXx 2009-08-04 . chapter 17you know, im starting to really love you XD cool story |
 The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule 2009-06-29 . chapter 17Awesome, that's one of your New Year's resolutions done!
GWY! |
 DBZROCKS10 2009-06-29 . chapter 17Wow. A nice summary of DBZ, all in one chapter. :P But still, I actually enjoyed this story. ^^
Gosh, I'm thankful that you recommend everyone to read my SAIYAN BLOOD stories. Thanks again. ^^
GWY! |
 godzillahomer 2009-06-29 . chapter 17very good chapter, but what about bardock after the freeza saga |
 DBZROCKS10 2009-03-16 . chapter 16Lol! To tell you the truth, Gohan kinda looks ridiculous in that suit and haircut, lol. :P
And I love that brief conversation with Bulma and Bardock.
GWY! |
 Knight25 2009-03-14 . chapter 16Good chapter. It was kinda funny. |
 Xenonwing 2009-03-14 . chapter 16Okay... needs some more humour. It was even MORE of a filler than fillers.
I make no sense at all, I know. xD
GWY!
~Xenonwop |
 The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule 2009-03-14 . chapter 16If you ever feel nervous about writing fight scenes for this fic, remember...I have it worse! At least YOUR readers won't be expecting you to write a good one between Goku and King Vegeta at the end. :\
Anyway, just write them, you'll do fine. ;)
GWY! |
 chris 2009-01-30 . chapter 15 keep up the good work. |
 Derra 2008-12-31 . chapter 15Ouch, poor Bardock first a steel table and now Chi-chi's frying pan, I wouldn't want to be him.
Derra ^^ |
 zarkan 2008-12-24 . chapter 15Not bad good chapter keep writing I want more and I hope that bardock can teach chi-chi a lesson on maners anyway update soon see ya. |
 narakunohime 2008-12-16 . chapter 15loved it. :3
Can't WAIT to read more. |