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sand500
2009-08-23 . chapter 16
ha ha
"And interfering with her plans got the death penalty. Or worse. The frying pan."
ha ha
"except for the kitchen sink in his luggage"
ha ha
"got them all with her weapon of mass destruction"
ha ha
dang this story is Funny!
seriously this is way lot funnier than "an ordinary family"
sand500
2009-08-23 . chapter 15
ha ha... steel table... ha ha XD
sand500
2009-08-23 . chapter 14
aww darn it... now i cant flame you...
(lol. dotn flame my flames unless it makes you fell better of something...)
xXoTaInTeD-bLoSsOmoXx
2009-08-04 . chapter 17
you know, im starting to really love you XD cool story
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2009-06-29 . chapter 17
Awesome, that's one of your New Year's resolutions done!

GWY!
DBZROCKS10
2009-06-29 . chapter 17
Wow. A nice summary of DBZ, all in one chapter. :P But still, I actually enjoyed this story. ^^

Gosh, I'm thankful that you recommend everyone to read my SAIYAN BLOOD stories. Thanks again. ^^

GWY!
godzillahomer
2009-06-29 . chapter 17
very good chapter, but what about bardock after the freeza saga
DBZROCKS10
2009-03-16 . chapter 16
Lol! To tell you the truth, Gohan kinda looks ridiculous in that suit and haircut, lol. :P

And I love that brief conversation with Bulma and Bardock.

GWY!
Knight25
2009-03-14 . chapter 16
Good chapter. It was kinda funny.
Xenonwing
2009-03-14 . chapter 16
Okay... needs some more humour. It was even MORE of a filler than fillers.

I make no sense at all, I know. xD

GWY!
~Xenonwop
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2009-03-14 . chapter 16
If you ever feel nervous about writing fight scenes for this fic, remember...I have it worse! At least YOUR readers won't be expecting you to write a good one between Goku and King Vegeta at the end. :\

Anyway, just write them, you'll do fine. ;)

GWY!
chris
2009-01-30 . chapter 15
keep up the good work.
Derra
2008-12-31 . chapter 15
Ouch, poor Bardock first a steel table and now Chi-chi's frying pan, I wouldn't want to be him.
Derra ^^
zarkan
2008-12-24 . chapter 15
Not bad good chapter keep writing I want more and I hope that bardock can teach chi-chi a lesson on maners anyway update soon see ya.
narakunohime
2008-12-16 . chapter 15
loved it. :3


Can't WAIT to read more.
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