Yeah, a Stephen fic! I always like those. I'm writing one meself at the moment. Your's looks like it's going to be a good one. Can't wait to read more.

Keep updating!

Lady Wallace

omg! you have to continue this pleeeease! you left it on such a cliffie i need to find out the ending!

Amazing story! :) Please do update!

I know the last time you updated this story was almost a year ago, but if you still have it in you, I would beg for you to continue it! It's one of a kind and I absolutely love the storyline. I'm extremely anxious to have Meghan and Stephen reunite, if this story is to continue even a bit.

It's wonderful and I hope there's still inspiration enough for more!

This is spectacular! Please, please continue soon!

I'm upset now. That was a really powerful and stirring chapter - you write well. Some sentences feel a bit choppy but so far I'm hooked. I look forward reading more tonight.

Heya, ah was just dabbling in the Braveheart section and your story leapt out at me! Well, it's certainly really good so far! Very suspenseful. I like Meghan's character so far and so, I can't wait to read more! Poor Logan!

Hi, OH You are devious! I can't believe this! NO! It was an amazing chapter. I like how Anice was very motherly. I think you maybe could have descibred Latham's tone or physical appearence a bit more. Great work!

Hi, beautiful chapter once again! Loving the emotion as usual. I liked how you showed progression with the horse. Very nice. I am so happy she made it back! Now if only Stephen knew!

Hi, I have never cheered while reading a Fan Fic. like I just did! NOO! But Stephen is in Scotland! I liked the use of prophanity, gave Meghan an edge, I would change NOTHING of this chapter. Everything was perfect. But I assume the cloaked person was Latham. Keep it up!

Hi, O I loved this chapter! I REALLY hope she does not accept! No problems. You captured Meghan's thoughts beautifully.

Hi, well it is review time! I liked this chapter, very insightful into how different their lives are and how much they really suffer. I remember you saying you needed help with grammer. When you say someone's age, you put dashes. four-year-old. :) You use a lot of and's and buts. There was one line... "She shook her head and headed back to the nursery room, and slammed the door behind her."

Instead of and slammed the door, make it more powerful. She shook her head and headed back to the nursery room, slamming the door behind her. The extra and makes it seem forced. A good tip a teacher of my once told me was: Avoid using two or more ands or buts in one sentence.

Good Stuff: You are awesome with raw emotion! Also great job with the accents. A story of mine, I had a woman with an Irish accent and it can be hard to make it heard. You do this very well. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more.

i love your story and i cant wait for your next update!

Hi, oh this chapter almost made me cry! I was very emotional, very powerful, very good. The only thing I would maybe change is that I was a tiny bit confused when Meghan's story first started. Maybe specify at first with a mini title? It was very good.

Hi, I FINALLY have 4 REAL days off to beta read! This chapter needs a bit of work. During the battle scene you should do more showing instead of telling. Make it a bit more epic. You did really well with the raw emotions. It's so sad that little Logan died :( But I could see Meghan's screams, not just hear them. Which is an amazing thing for a writer to do. I felt as though I was there. When you have people talking it's with quotation marks. "I know what I have done." Not sure if you can use 'I know what I have done.' I was always told, and in every book it's quotes. Just something to point out. :) Keep up the good work. I will keep reading and thanks for having patients. :)