 sweetysmart0505 2008-05-28 . chapter 1That was really great to read. Awesome job! |
 Emilee-san. 2008-03-11 . chapter 1Aw tha's so good!
We reall see a sweet side of Hwoarang, which we don't nomally see in stories
Good job! |
 Chaos Rainbow 2008-01-31 . chapter 1OMG! I love this song this was a good fic :) P.S.its Xiaoyu |
 Couture.Doll 2008-01-30 . chapter 1aww i love this song and this fic
it was truly amazing really
got me feeling the pain that hwoa must've
been feeling at that pointt!! |
 La Petite Rose 2008-01-30 . chapter 1Cool,that was sweet. |
 Sage Pagan 2008-01-30 . chapter 1As you might already know, Hwoarang/Julia is my all time favorite Tekken couple, and I'm glad you wrote this. I like how you incorporated the song lyircs in it. It wasn't over the top, but described Hwoa's pain in a simple but heartfelt way. Even though this fic was so short, it captured his heartache well. What a dummy; he shoulda said those three words sooner! Grr! He lost her to Jin! And the whole rain and beer drinking thing was nice, and it actually reminded me of my fic, "White Lilies and Fragile Smiles". Overall, nice, simple oneshot. It's going in the C2 Archive. ;) |
 Hello Nessa 2008-01-29 . chapter 1Aw, this fic is way too cute and sad. It's really cool that you made Hwoarang the one who has his heart broken because he seems like the "player" type, and it's cool to see how he reacts when he's heartbroken.
Hwoarang/Julia is my favorite couple and I just wanted to read the story, but when I found out it was about them. I was happy (:
You did really good on this, even though it's so short! :P
Oh and for Xiaoyu, it's spelled like that not, Xaiyou.
You didn't actually made Julia the bad person, maybe she really did think that he didn't love her anymore. Somehow this one shot reminded me of mines where Hwoarang didn't say the three words either ^-^
Eek, I'm rambling on too much. Anyways you did really good on this! Keep up the good work and post up some more! ^-^ |
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