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| andhearts 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseIt is unreal how much I love this story. :D This is proably in my top three in the best Time Travel/Altenate Universe stories. And believe me, I read almost any of them I can find. lol I've been meaning to review this for a couple weeks now, but I've never had enough time. Dang. This is so wonderful! I love the way that you include most of the new stuff that's happening in the manga. :D I can't wait for the nest update! I thought Rin was all nice, and had turned bad later! But she was bad all along in this! Oh man, and the cliff hanger!! Gah! It made me happy to see that Hinata, Shika, and Naruto became chuunin. :D I love them. Keep up the awesomeness! |
| MKofGod 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseOh you didn't. I can't BELIEVE YOU! How... how... Okay, that was just cruel. But it was great! I'm sure you'll get a lot of comments about it - just don't revel too much, or you might be tempted to leave us hanging more often. Rin's evil! I didn't see that one comming. And the attack appears to be happening, which is a BIG relief. Or, well, if not then attack, something else that'll get Naruto off the hook. The fight between Naruto and Gaara is one of my favorite parts of your story. I hope you develop the friendship between the two of them, as it's something I always felt was missing in the manga. Hinata - so cute! And Hiashi was... interesting. He's always been a controverial character, but I think you did a good job with him. Oh - Naruto turning into a toad was HILARIOUS! Cheers and a thousand huzzahs for merging new manga with your story - impressive! And he made chuunin, against all odds! Yet another unexpected twist. Well, looking forward to your next chapter with great anticipation! |
| Digitaldestiny360 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abusedamn you. that's like, the biggest cliffhanger yet. Rin switches sides. there's a second of an oto nin appearing, then it's over. i really can't wait for the next chapter now |
| tatewaki2000 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuse^^ ZOMG AH A CLIFFY. LIKE OH NO! lol. jk. I luv cliffhangers, :) Fantastic chappy. |
| taintedlegacy 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseI hate you so much...there's no invasion first off. And now Rin is betraying Naruto for some reason. I hope she has a good reason for doing it... Anyways, I loved the little speech between Hiashi and Hinata. I like how you have set it up so they could start to reconcile their differences. And the fight between Naruto and Gaara-just awesome. I loved every second of it. Keep up the good work and update soon! |
| Kheidi 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseAt first I was like, how did you know about the sage chakra and then I remembered that this was recently written... ehehe... It was an good chapter. Naruto got a promotion (yay!). Thanks for the update. |
| Kalisko 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseI love this chapter. I like the fact that you made me absolutely furious and indignant with that character. Magnificent! |
| Dragon Soul Weaver 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseI just wanna say something, A good chapter yes, but the way you make Naruto act in most of the story he is a bad ass. He's like a shadow to everyone, untouchable. Then, he's easily taken out by Rin, even after he had is suspicions about her in the first place, just didn't add up. Keep writing. |
| Chronos guardian 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseThat was an awesome chapter. Damn you Rin! How dear you kidnap Naruto-kun. Thanks for the chapter! |
| Equitas 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abusewow. First: Best. Chapter. Ever. Second: you're a total D-bag. I honestly think this is the best chapter of the story, and probably one of the best single chapters on this site I've ever read. If you need two weeks to turn out that kind of quality, that's fine by me. (in case it wasn't clear, the "D-bag" comment was for the cliff hanger) |
| A-man 2008-09-06 ch 37, anon. | abuseGreat stuff. |
| gone119 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| Shinen no Hikari 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abusei'm always hearing authors complain about school being bad for the story because they never have time to continue writing it, but for me school has always helped my story because i only actually find time to write during my spare time in the middle of class so why don't you try writing during your spare time during your classes. Maybe it will help you with your stories. |
| Khellan Rafe 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseSweet... Things are finally happening! Hopefully, this isn't going to be a 'sit Naruto out and make him feel guilty' invasion, but hey, you gotta do what you gotta do, right? Keep it up man, this story is badass! |
| Cheska 2008-09-06 ch 37, | abuseAh-ha! So Rin is bad! And the Sound IS up to something! Well, that takes a load off. :D I'm glad Naruto isn't wrong about everything. I enjoyed the fight against Gaara. Too bad Naruto owed Teuchi money, but at least Naruto got Gaara's friendship out of it! |