O.O Please update, this is really good!

J.S.

Yesh, I'm reveiwing this story two, I like it for several reasons.

1) Meowth is getting for credit and I happen to like the cat.

2) Its interesting, nuff said.

3)Cause I do.

What would be interesting is the wounds Ash recieved from both Terr and the fence. I know this is supposed to be a lighter fic, because of One Heart and One but I think it would be interesting in several things happend.

1) Ash and Meowth are now immune to most electric attacks, given the fact they have been heavily shocked for, what sounds like, several times and can now escape the Rocket Base.

2) Ash become mute because of Terr damaging his neck, making Meowth sorta like his voice. Ya know, talking pokemon but mute trainer, how ironic.

3) Ash escapes and becomes a master anyways, but a more skilled and less lucky one that catches more pokemon and doesn't have two Gym leaders following him around like they have nothing better to do.

Toodles,

Thi

This is a really good story! _ I like stories where Jessie James and Meowth are the main characters and the good guys. But it feels like there are some loose ends...I suppose it might be too much to ask for you to pick up a story you havn't worked on in three years and start writing it again. Good work, anyway (as usual)!

Wowzers. Giovanni isn't happy at all, is he?
Hm. Methinks this bit where Meowth replaces Pikachu is very interesting, but will Ash ever meet up with Pikachu? Seeing as you've kept Meowth, Jessie, and James in the story, are you going to introduce Brock and Misty and others? Will Ash finally get out?
*sniffles* I hope that this fic gets off of being "on hold" pretty soon...PLEASE UPDATE! *down on knees* Purty purty please?

Good story. Only one of the stile i've seen so far.

I do believe Ash's father is Giovanni, for a set of reasons.

1- The anime series script writers are horrible, so I believe they will use the old "hero's dad is the bad guy" cliché 'cause they wouldn't be able to come up with anything better.

2- I've read somewhere that, when they were really young, Delia, Samuel and Giovanni went on a journey together.

3- My own twisted imagination.

Anyway, another masterpiece. But what else could we expect from Dragoness?

Hope you write more of this.

Melchior.

gr evil site it said it was experincing and overload. It was the everything changes story and i was at chapter 34 and it wouldnt let me submit a review for it oh well Ill finish it when the site likes me agoin. love the story and I hope you continue it

I absolutely love this story. I just had to read it again. (I read it at your website). Well anyway I hope you take another break from One Heart to write some more to not that I don't like one Heart, its just that I want to read more on this one. I hope you can or will. It is the best, and most original. You did very well on the characters. You can so tell that they are alive(in a way). You really bring that flame of life in your stories. Good luck to you!

-Kaxan

It's great! I don't think that it is freaky at all. Different but not freaky. I just can't wait till you finish it... If you finish it. Well thanks for the entertainment. Please write back.

-Kaxan

When Ash gets his license he get charmander who would later become charizard,make his second pikachu and 3rd primeape then squirtle,bulbasaur and finaly how about giving Ash an evolution he could have more pokemon with him like pigeotto

this is a really good idea and i hope u continue it soon

How about Ash makes friends with Sabrina i heard in the Manga ( the one based off game when hes Red) shes apart of Team rocket along with Koga, I think they should have a Bro/Sis relationship.

Good story.

a very good way of showing Giovanni's evilness at the end there.

Good good. But I see youve got it on hold. GOOD! On with OH!

This is really good! I really like how you did this! Ash may have grown up in Team Rocket, but he is still Ash! This is a GREAT story!

So far, I think this is the best story of yours I've read! Although I don't think Giovanni is Ash's father (but that's just me), this offers a very interesting look on what might have happened if he WAS... and if Ash had grown up with Team Rocket.

The best part of the story is the Ash/Meowth relationship - so much like the Ash/Pikachu one in "our" reality, yet so different. Well done on the characterisation - The familiar characters are true enough to their old selves to be the same people we know and love from the TV series, but there are enough differences here to even further establish this as an "alternate" reality.

Ash, for example, seems to be a more skilled (as opposed to "just lucky") trainer in this reality, maybe because he's grown up with Team Rocket and had access to training Pokemon all his life. But he also seems like more of a brat, having grown up without a loving mother (Giovanni no doubt loves his son, but seems to have problems expressing it). Still, he has kept his infamous enthusiasm and head-in-the-clouds attitude.

Meowth, having Ash as his trainer, seems like more of a fighting Pokemon and less of a "human in the body of a Pokemon." He also doesn't seem to be QUITE as good at talking as he is in the series - he sometimes slips over in "baby talk." Was this intentional (maybe to show that he hadn't practiced talking as much as he had battling in this reality) or did you just get carried away when typing out his Jersey accent? _

I really hope you'll continue this soon - the first four chapters serve as a good introduction to this new reality, but has definitely left me hungry for more.