Very well written. Best Cloud/Tifa lemon that I have come across. The love scene here was what I would expect in a romance novel, 10 stars!

I love it! The lemon is very tasteful and extremely hot...^^ Not to mention that the keen attention to the bartending is fun as well. I always do the ice-in-water glass chilling thing whenever I make myself a cocktail at home...a bartender friend of mine showed me that one a few years ago and I've never gone back to plain old "on the rocks" again. xD

Awesome, awesome story! My gawd, it was completely wonderful to read. Keep up the good work! :D

Thank u 4 wrighting this i have a lot of trouble finding good het lemon & u wote 1

That was just brilliant, keep it up and write more.

I love this story. ClouTi is my favorite couple and I've read the best fic about it. I add it to my favorites and good continuation, you worth it!
Misora.

*hugs you 'till you pass out, notices that you passed out and revives you with phoenix down*

^_^

i loved it. and to think you're dyslexic...

i admire you, i really do!

^_^

aw so cute!! ^_~

I feel so warm and tingly inside! ;-) I loved the whole thing, it was well done. You have grammar problems though, because I got the feeling you were torn between making it a 2nd person or a 3rd person account. Other than that, great going! Good luck in the future! Bonzai!

This is a very very very very good fic.. I love the way you wrote their emotions, conversations and every bit of this fic.. Especially with the mixing of drinks and stuff... Quite informative.. Absolutely fantastic!! I'm giving you this much credit coz you deserve it.. I keep on reading this fic over and over again and i can't get enough of it.. A round of applause... Haha! This is really good.. At least you didn't focus solely on the lemon.. Two thumbs up! ^_^

I love this story.
This story very great...bravo.
Cloti love

That is the longest lemon ever XD

Really good :)

Pretty...

I think the only advise I would give for your writing is to try and stay in one perspective.

Loved it

I just wanted to say that i love this piece, the way u captured their emotion was perfectly written, even with the lemon, the emotions with the two through the experience, and everything about this fic was beautifully written, excellent job. Well Done!