 Sonic Phantom 9/1/08 . chapter 1I'm sorry, but who is Darkspike? Just curious.
Good oneshot, though. :) |
 Flicker's Owner 2/10/08 . chapter 1oh! a Sonic fanfic about Christianity...(or at least it's about religion stuff) I like the theme so far. However since it's about religion I think the story should be more complex and had alternative definition of sin (Or probably it was me who had different view on 'sin' thing)
Anyway, i like Darkspine's character development. In story i usually pay a lot attention on character development. awesome! |
 JimmyandCindyforever 2/4/08 . chapter 1Aw, I liked it! Very good! _ |
 shadowsaver 2/2/08 . chapter 1preaty cool. that was very interestiong. Mabe just mabye i think that you got enough emotion and that you also got Darkspike character. 5 out of 5 stars. |
 Silver Sheilds 1/30/08 . chapter 1Very nice. I like it, especially when Darkspine explained what sin is and that Jesus will make it all right. Being a Christian, I can agree with all of that. |
 Keyblade Master of Promise 1/29/08 . chapter 1This was a pleasant read, you portrayed the idea of sin and hinted on salvation every well, I applaud you for that. Well done, maybe I should consider doing something like this. Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this :).
KBMP |
 TorpeGraveYard1031 1/29/08 . chapter 1I really liked that! It was some, blissful insight. I loved it! Good work... |