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Sonic Phantom 9/1/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry, but who is Darkspike? Just curious.

Good oneshot, though. :)
Flicker's Owner 2/10/08 . chapter 1
oh! a Sonic fanfic about Christianity...(or at least it's about religion stuff) I like the theme so far. However since it's about religion I think the story should be more complex and had alternative definition of sin (Or probably it was me who had different view on 'sin' thing)

Anyway, i like Darkspine's character development. In story i usually pay a lot attention on character development. awesome!
JimmyandCindyforever 2/4/08 . chapter 1
Aw, I liked it! Very good! _
shadowsaver 2/2/08 . chapter 1
preaty cool. that was very interestiong. Mabe just mabye i think that you got enough emotion and that you also got Darkspike character. 5 out of 5 stars.
Silver Sheilds 1/30/08 . chapter 1
Very nice. I like it, especially when Darkspine explained what sin is and that Jesus will make it all right. Being a Christian, I can agree with all of that.
Keyblade Master of Promise 1/29/08 . chapter 1
This was a pleasant read, you portrayed the idea of sin and hinted on salvation every well, I applaud you for that. Well done, maybe I should consider doing something like this. Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this :).

KBMP
TorpeGraveYard1031 1/29/08 . chapter 1
I really liked that! It was some, blissful insight. I loved it! Good work...
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