 laloga 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Aw! So sweet! Chaplain and Karai make a cute couple, which you portrayed beautifully. If you could change anything, it would be to make this longer! Thanks for the read! |
 andrea 2009-01-04 . chapter 1 you're an idiot
Karai hates Chaplin more than she hates Hun. 'nuff said |
 Alda MN 2008-10-16 . chapter 1Interesting. But I don't agree with this parring. And I can't imagine Chaplin and Karai kiss. But you are a good writer, don't get me wrong.It is always nice to read something differend. |
 Jessiy Landroz 2008-01-30 . chapter 1FINALLY! Someone did a sweet KaraiChaplin oneshot! xD; I've been wanting to do one myself, but couldnt find the plot, or a believeable one without involving Leo, (thus infesting the wangst,) and this one fits like a glove~ ♥ well, assuming it's not a medic or a lab glove, anyway XD;; Karai's got her hands full with the boy, (and I call him boy cause though a man, he sure acts like Mikey XD;) and personally, I found his goatee very cute~ doesnt help that I like redheads, either..
The kiss got me by surprise, but I still liek the way you've woven the mistress/employee thing, thoguh i figure it might end up as something more later on~ |
 DisneyDelinquent 2008-01-30 . chapter 1*devours*
This is so adorable!
"Food might indeed be the way to a normal man’s heart, as the saying went, but the way to an overextended scientist’s heart was most certainly caffeine."
Best line ever! And so true lol. I love the way you write the characters, and the way that you just dump so many tones all at once - the danger of the situation, the heart, the humor. It's like you've taken their whole relationship and condensed it into this little package of fanficcy goodness.
True brilliance, as always darlin'! |
 Reinbeauchaser 2008-01-29 . chapter 1As always, dear DB, a masterful job. Your tag at the end was very well placed. A nice tidy bow on this short, but entertaining read.
Good job!
Be blessed,
Rene' |
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