Well written.

is there to be more?

Man! that was a close call!
Darcy Darcy tsk tsk..must control himself before saying anything.
Aw, anyway they made up ^^
keep the good writing!

I read all 5 ficlets and I loved each of them! I only hope that you have more to write and I can't wait to read it. Keep em comin!

Lizzy's having a baby! Yess! I kind of can imagine Lizzy holding a grudge for longer...but that's love for you! I can't believe Mr. Bennett died before meeting his grandchild! He was one of my fav. characters (Besides liz/darcy) obviously...great job! Happy fanficcing!

lovely. i really enjoyed your style. beautiful imagery. wonderful work!

My faveorite of all your stories, and for good reason. Excelently written!

all your endearment stories are really cute and really well written.

perhaps...i don't know if you're bored with the idea,
maybe you should write like a sequel, but its also like that
but it's about their fights, and how they resolve them and stuff.
I think you're the only 1 that portrayed their love really well
so you should definitely try another emotion.

Love your stories
Rosalie

Loved it! I just read all five of these stories and I have to say-your talent for writing and your creative, lovely ideas are amazingly clear. Your work on these pieces is fantastic and I hope you realize how gifted you are. Rarely have a read something that is both clear and well-written as well as interesting and romantic. It gives me great enjoyment to read these little stories and I dearly hope there is more where these came from!

oh, that was beautifully written! i love your writing style!

i really liked this--u should keep going and add the funeral and stuff.
This story gave me a really good idea for one of my own--thanks!
and also, i like ur style of righting. it really fits the early 19th century.
:D

How sad. Sweet ending though.

I love your characterization of Darcy and Elizabeth, I think that they both would have responded to this situation just as you wrote it. Please continue this story! It is so true to Austen that it would be a crime not to. Thank you for taking the time to write this and I look forward hopefully to reviewing your next piece on Darcy and Elizabeth.

beautiful!
the first couple's altercation. Written so admirable, i shall say. I love this couple and their ability of being so lovely!
Congratulations.

Marvelous OneShot! =)

~Nicole