warning: you can either take this as a flame or constructive critique. Either way. I read the first chapter and I simply cannot go on. The story was jumbled up making it hard to read and this story had no plot to start with. It was all a big mess and I had a bit of trouble with finding out what was happening. Also, everything was too dramatic and cheesy. The story itself was sort of a cliche especially when you used the title "Ice Angel" The characters are very OOC and your original characters are Mary-Sues. Overall, this story has a weak plot. Uninteresting (for me)