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Reviews For: Saiyajin Heartbreak

Android 24
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseWow...that's all I can say...i'm definatly supporting the fact of a companion piece or a sequel. In fact, and i know you might have said this, I think that you should start an entire story to give us a complete history of all the events that led up to this like what the characters pasts are and everything...think that would be amazing with you descriptive capabilities! :-)
Rai/Kat
2008-01-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH MY GOD!

MIMICA! XD Holy crap this story was amazing. Your writing has come SO far and your descriptions were just fabulous. I loved your choice of words and the story was so short but heartbreaking. Loved it loved it loved it. The flashback was just a little bit confusing, but otherwise you did an amazing job hun. =3 UPDATE!
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