I've just finished reading your story. I thought it was really good and i'm looking forward to reading the next part of the trilogy:)

Holy crap again! You're killing me here! Two down though...only one left. Does he ever get to go home?

You are absolutely evil! Your stories are so tremendous - epic! I read the first of this trilogy and this story in the span of about one and a half days. So wiped out now lol. As an obsessive reader, your stories are the worst - I just can't stop myself! Fantastic plot, though, one of the most unique writers out there if I don't say so myself. Comparing this to Wastelands of Time, however, I think it's pretty clear how much you've improved.

The grandness of scale, the awe-inspiring battles and Harry as a darker, grittier character - there's elements of Wastelands of Time that are scattered throughout this trilogy. But the coherence in the linking of ideas, the use of appropriate vocab, the ever more surprising twists of plot definitely mark your evolution as a writer. Not that I have a huge right to comment or anything, since I probably don't hold a candle to you lol.

Still, brilliant work!

why didnt that silly boy just summon his earring!?!

first of all, i love the Allarius' names; all those literary villians! lmao BUT, i think you meant Sauron, no Saruman. Sauron was the big power, the Eye. Saruman was just a corrupted White Wizard who was just a pawn to Sauron. but your mentioning of the Witchking would say otherwise...
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oh no, not thomas fright!...
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now why the hell isnt the cure for Nundu breath more universally known!? thats kinda selfish not to share that infomation! seriously, why wouldnt they share that? i dont see anything evil that can come of sharing the information...
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Allarius kinda reminds me of Will O' the Wisp, from So Weird...
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"The End was showing itself, and there was redemption for none as long as the saviour was gone.

And hey, that rhymes."

no. no it doesn't lol...
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wo! death by rose! lmao now what, exactly, had he done that was supposedly impossible?...
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im assuming his pupil is still as black as ever? its just the iris that's washed out a little?...
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how disturbing to have Allariuss voice as your conscience lol...
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god! and to think i still have 13 chapters left of this story, and then a-whole-nother story after THIS! this is why i added them to my C2, the Stories of Epic Proportions one lol

This sounds interesting

I like this story, thank you.

Well I said it at the end of your last story and I'll say it again: It's a great story!! I really liked it! although it is confusing at times it stays a great story. so I'm going to read the last part now. poor harry he forgot it all. I'm curious what will happen now!

"In the north of Scotland, up past Edinburgh and Glasgow, lies a quiet and fairly unnoticed range of mountains and valleys that is known as Glencoe."

...Glascow is in Russia...
i dont know what you're talking about, that castle sounds splended. summer home material, duh. lol jk (obviously)...
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what kind of 12 year old says "i couldn't meet his gaze?"

IT IS LIKE ONE BIG GIGANTIC VOYAGE. Homer, maybe? I think the difference between women and men in writing is profound.

I found myself screaming at you through most of the first and second part. HP had to do some things alone, but not all of them. None of us in this world are an island. A task such as this would be shared in a woman's story, but I guess that is what makes it all so very interesting.

I actually had to stop reading yesterday. Unfortunately, this story does not carry quite the same awe as the last one did. Mostly because it's become so much about self inflection and mind games that the real world is lost in confusion. I do admit i've come to really like this new world you've created and your sense of epicicism has never faded.

God I was ** when he didn't get back to his own world, though I admit, this was what I was expecting when reading the summary. Other worlds. Like... 'actually' other worlds. Not just different versions of his own so I can't really complain.

It's still amazing, if not quite as awe striking as the previous installment. And that's mostly because of the ear splitting headache it gave me. I'm good now though, and you're still doing well.

I hope the third and final arc is as good as the first, though I think i've given up on expecting this one to reach the incredible feel of the first.

Ja!

MB

I was wondering when you were going to finally prove that I was right with this crossing over into The Dark Tower, and this chapter finally proved it...

Though I was suspecting it since the White Rose was first mentioned...

Interesting perception, but of course it's a natural cross over if you've actually read the Dark Tower series, I suppose...

jeez joe. reading this epic story... awed at what you created I am. well on to the next one. peace

Doctor Denton?

Very clever. I laughed out loud at that.

This is definitely a VERY original story. very good, and very unusual. you have some imagination