Aww, this is so freaking adorable, i've been grinning like an idiot through this whole thing. You write the most amazing fics for this lovely pairing. Thank you so much for the great read!

DUDE! thats is a gift of writing you got that right there, i loved every part of it!

Whew, that was such a steamy story!

The Second Person POV in this is such a brilliant device; really emphasizes Kazu's internal torture. A really great example of it's use is here, "But you were expecting to be licking the mud off of Ikki’s shoes, or being his slave for the entire day, or – and you should be so lucky – to kiss him smack dab on the lips." There is such a fascinating volley between the cold realization of his desires and the sarcastic reply to them, all from the same voice, as though his own anguish has become a hurtful narrator to his life.

The pace in this story is astounding as well! The profanity and raw, honest emotion really rips the story forward in a series of angry and lustful bouts. You can feel the frantic journey through the woods and the sexual tension in Kazu's rescue.

I can't give enough credit to the awesomely vicarious hook up at the end. It was so gloriously horny and needful! Wonderful descriptions and focus of emotion!

This is a beautiful story from an exceptionally talented writer. Well done!

How fucking adorable. I'm glad I found you! I followed the link to you from Kitten-chan's DevArt page.

*happy she was interested*

And interesting point of view, here. I rather like it.

Thanks for writing!

-NN

OH MAI GAWD@ SMEXINESS! :D finally something thats past just a kiss!

Oh my goodness this is really hot and makes me ridiculously happy... And I love the second person POV, it makes everything better. Great job indeed.

there were 3 things i loved about this fic:

1) The use of second person, which really made it that much more personal and erotic

2) The overuse of the word "fuck". I dunno why, but that really added this delicious intensity to the work, and left me all hot and flustered.

3) The way ikki completely DOMINATED kazu. hehe, i find domination like that really sexy, and the whole being forced to do the dares just added to it. ok, so maybe im a little perverted! but you're the one writing this delectable smut!

(hehe and maybe theres a number 4 - the image of the trees RAPING kazu. hilarious (yet also strangely tantalizing... oh dear i think i just admitted to having a tree fetish XD ))


but yeah, to sum up, this oneshot just sizzles off the skin. Great work ;)

OMG im so inlove with your fanfictions! when ever i feel empty ill read one of these and be like BAM! all fixed XD keep up the best-work-ive-ever-loved.!!

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I... I'm so, so happy right now. XD This fic was delicious.

Eeh~ this was awesome! I absolutely love your writing style! The way you describe things and such, even though it's easy to read, it makes you think about the things in the story.
Totally gonna fave it.

alsdkjfk; So hot. Yes, they're only kissing and necking, but damn you write good soft-smut! *grins* Awesome work. I love how they egg each other on with dares.

~fd97

This...this is absolutely brilliant. I loved it to bits and pieces. Beautiful descriptions, and the characterization's right on.

Absolutely loved it! Man, I can't believe I used to hate this stuff.

Maybe I still do, but I definitely don't if it involves Ikki and Kazu. :P And if you're writing it, haha.

Hopefully you update Folly and Sin soon, or come out with other new short stories. I can't get enough of them. (:

I love your collaborations with Kitten! I actually found you through a link on her DA. Lovely =)

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(wow) I had nothing to say... I was so hot reading this fic it was so fucking cute(i can actually visualize my self coz you emphasis the "you" which i know kazu but i can relate)

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i still have this blush on my face and i actually read it for 10 times this week it was full "cuteness"

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well from now on im going to use the triple-dog-dare in my whole life