 Satzuki 2009-09-07 . chapter 5UWA~~ post more post more >OW< |
 Falling Right Side-Up 2008-12-22 . chapter 5Heehee, cute. Interesting that the one everyone thinks is after Sena isn't. Lol. |
 The Gentleman J 2008-12-18 . chapter 5Why would Hiruma be regretting it?
Otherwise, this is hilarious.
~Jack |
 Yokai no Miko 2008-09-25 . chapter 5Ooh this is a great story too! I wish you would write more Eyeshield 21 fanfiction. |
 Lilbakasaru 2008-08-28 . chapter 5oH wow this is hilarious! Poor Kakei...or should I say poor Sena? Since everyone is after his ass! Love it! I hope to see more of it soon! |
 IDK aka CJ 2008-08-18 . chapter 5 hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahaha!
yeah, fight for sena's heart!
hahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahaha!
he got all of u wrapped around his cute tiny, innocent fingers!
hahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahha!
sena might be gud for BJs everyone! Dont forget it!
hahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahaha!
lol, and dont forget to give him a lollipop to test if he is! lol |
 anonymus 2008-08-03 . chapter 5 awesome fic. im just wondering who it'd be? dunno upload more and umm make the chapters longer |
 Kiseki Lin 2008-06-21 . chapter 5This had me rolling. LOL moments are definitely in here. Sena-kun is so cute with his naivety!
I don't think Hiruma's going to regret his plan. I can find him seeing the reactions from the men as extreme gleeful sadism. It also gives him a good insight on who likes Sena, who just sees him as a friend, and who has a lot of feelings for Sena.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't think I laughed as much in a while reading shounen-ai stories. I love reading this one though.
~Lin~
Question: Does Harao, Banba, Marco Kid, and Tetsuma like Sena too? 0_0 |
 BlueRedemption 2008-06-09 . chapter 5Lol, aw! Where did the Kakei/Sena go? I like that pairing. I think it rather smexy. LOL.
Continue on though, I'd like to see where this goes XD
Hiruma's such an evil, evil man. Hahaha |
 ramenluv 2008-05-10 . chapter 5heh i was waiting for a murdering fest!
and the winner would get Sena XD |
 Nightmaric 2008-04-26 . chapter 5Really amusing story, though it is rather saddening to know that Hiruma wouldn't be among the competitors for Sena. Pity, pity. I wonder who would kill who first in the brawl. I'm betting Agon would kick most of the people's asses. (laughs) |
 ONIX-21 2008-04-26 . chapter 5haha loved this chapter very funny :D
cant wait for more :D |
 Tuli-Susi 2008-04-26 . chapter 5That was so funny! lol can just see it... hey, were Monta and Shin also there? But damn...I thought Kakkei liked Sena...I really like that pairing...actually, I just like Kakkei's eyes, but meh.
Looking forward to hearing about Hiuma's rants! |
 BlueRedemption 2008-04-24 . chapter 4Lol, cute! I hope to see more of this story. Hahah. I love EveryonexSena. Especially if it's oblivious!Sena |
 Arcellant 2008-03-09 . chapter 4Interesting, but it is a bit confusing... Keep it up though! |