 styling16 2009-04-08 . chapter 1aw... this is so sweet!! |
 EdwardxBella4ever434 2009-04-02 . chapter 1simply amazing! lovely! I love
it! bye! keep writing take care! |
 girl 2009-02-09 . chapter 1 aw! so cute and roamticn a,nd sweet and fluffy. Edwar days the sweestet tihngs doesn't he? |
 CUZ-im-KOOL-like-THAT 2008-08-19 . chapter 1aw so cute |
 Xxyupthat'srightxX 2008-04-21 . chapter 1THANK YOU!
i was in desperate need for some fluff and all i could find was a bunch of poor excuses for a pile of crap...until i found this one!
it's just what i needed!
THANK YOU! |
 MistressOfTheNight16 2008-04-02 . chapter 1that was really good u shoulf kept going |
 XxlirxX 2008-03-13 . chapter 1it was awesome! you want to knokw what you can do to improve so you should make Edward's thinking more complex- he over thinks EVERYTHING, so make sure he over thinks atleast some things in your fanfics. if your other ones aren't like this, then i'm sorry I wasted your time xD |
 leahswings 2008-02-29 . chapter 1YAY! more fluff!
- Image. |
 crzybookluvrchick4017 2008-02-08 . chapter 1aw very cute (not being sarcastic) |
 MissEdwardCullen12 2008-01-30 . chapter 1 INSANLY CUTE! I absaloutly loved it, I always love stories in Edwards POV. Be sure to keep writing ^_^
Luvs
MissEdwardCullen12 |
 anelyna 2008-01-30 . chapter 1aw it's sweet! and it's really good..as it is FLUFF! :D :D :D |
 jade 2008-01-30 . chapter 1 that was great please right more |
 CRAZYfor theCULLENS 2008-01-30 . chapter 1aww i loved it so much ! edward and bella forever !! great story |
 MidnightxRed 2008-01-30 . chapter 1aw!
love it!!
and it is nice to read a fluff everynow and then..
you should write some other fluffly ones ^__^ |
 libra44 2008-01-30 . chapter 1aw tht was so sweet
i loved it all
the way they are together
its wonderful
i like it
good job |