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| Newfiegirl17 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseI think it's beautiful the story you've created from such a terrible crime. Its sad to hear what happened, but you know that because of your story more people can hear about it and those people will be remembered. |
| moonlightfan44 2008-03-05 ch 3, | abusethat was a good story. r u continuing it? plz, i'd like 2 know! :) |
| moonjat54 2008-03-01 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter, I like how Mick went out and got all kinds of food so Beth could choose. Isn't he sweet? Looking ahead to more story when you have time. |
| brntofferings 2008-02-22 ch 2, | abusei like this, you have a really good plot going and your not rushing the characters at all which is something thats surprisingly hard to! i cant wait for the next update! |
| Redlioness62 2008-02-20 ch 2, | abuseYou have a good fflow going keep it up. |
| moonjat54 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseI liked this chapter. Hunters will be an interesting story line. Can't wait to see where you go with this. |
| shell36799 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good chapter. Sorry about what happened in your country. It does make this story seem more real though. Please continue. |
| moonjat54 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI am so sorry to hear of this tragedy. This adds a very real element to your story. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could right the worlds wrongs like they do on television? Keep writing and let us know how Mick solves this. And may your country find some peace for this sad event. |
| Jewels127 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseLove the chapter and would be interested in learning about your countries difficulties - please write more. |
| emaline5678 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great first chapter. I was going to comment about how the crime sounded almost too out there. Then I read that it was a real life crime and it hit me hard. What a horrible, horrible crime. Using a real life crime as a base for your story kind of gives things a realistic vibe that works. Good luck with the rest of your story - I can't wait to see how this plays out. Hopefully Mick can solve the case...and get closer to Beth at the same time! |
| xosummerxo 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abusegood chapter continue |