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| Saffygirl 2008-10-05 ch 8,  | abuseThis is an awesome story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| Mionefan 2008-10-05 ch 8, | abuseGood action packed scene with Crouch. |
| Grey8 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abusea fun story here, the more things change the more they stay the same :). anyway i am enjoying this and hope you write more. |
| Alexandria Fairweather 2008-10-04 ch 7, | abusehullo, where r u? need more chapters. i really love this story. please please write more chapters alex x |
| Cocoa Girl2 2008-10-02 ch 7, | abuseThis is an awesome story and I hope you make it very lengthy. Will many more people find out about Harry and Hermione? Will Harry help out any of the other champions, train for the task? Or just himself? I wouldn't mind if Harry tries to get all the champions to stick together, train together and lets them all in on what the first task is. I also find it very strange that there are two champions for each school. I wonder what the daily prophet will say about that. I also hope that Harry and Hermione will become friends with Luna early in this story? And could Harry start up the DA early too? The champions could teach each other spells. |
| Mona Ogg 2008-09-30 ch 7, | abuseNice story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| dougal74 2008-09-30 ch 7, | abuseAnother well written chapter. |
| keelycal 2008-09-28 ch 8, | abuseplease hurry and update!~ i really love this story please?!!? |
| Wistful-Dreamer 2008-09-28 ch 2, | abuseThe story is okay so far but there are a few things I would like to point out that don't mesh. In chapter one you had Dumbledore dieing while defending the castle from a number of Giants, in this chapter you have him dieing from a blood boiling hex while defending Ron with Harry when you have Harry in chapter one with Hermione heading for Voldemort and Ron heading for Luna and his family. You also repeated yourself in the telling of Snapes death, Hermione's almost death, Harry's proposing to Hermione and you had Hermione only just finishing her Animagus form in chapter two when you had her take the potion that forces the transformation in chapter one, as well as repeating the forms. Sorry, not meaning to criticize or anything. Just letting you know the inconstancy's I found. Ciao! |
| keelycal 2008-09-27 ch 4, | abuseI LOVED IT! |
| keelycal 2008-09-27 ch 3, | abuseI LOVE THIS YOU ARE AWSOME!! |
| keelycal 2008-09-27 ch 1, | abusei L-O-V-E-D it! |
| gaul1 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abusegood chapter, intriguing development, keep up the good work, interesting that it was boy and girl from each school, keep up the good work, byes |
| CRaZY TeDDy 2008-09-20 ch 8, | abuseWo thats crazy ** man! |
| CRaZY TeDDy 2008-09-20 ch 7, | abuse:( i feel sorry for Michelle she seems nice, should put in more things with her. |