That was a story?

“You will succumb to my will eventually, Kira, and I will be waiting for that moment.
I definitely want to see that!

Okay dumb question on my part. If I wanted to know about your favourites, go to your profile list LOL!
So true to my word, I am looking around at your DN fics. This one's wow, LOL and here I thought you were new at the whole yaoi stuff and first started in Redeemer.

I like how you demonstrated the power struggle in this short drabble. And made it /hot/.

I like.

It's alright considering that it's so short. I think I would have liked it better had it been longer and I don't mean if the.. goings on had continued, but just more of other stuff I guess. I see a lot of lines that shouldn't have been made into new paragraphs though. Like the last two, for example.