I heart this story! I find myself reading it once every year, just about.-Elf

What an amazing story. It was so well thought out, and incredibly well written. Even though I generally focus on MR, I was completely drawn into this tale. You truly have a talent, and you are an inspiration to all us beginners out there.

Be proud of a tale that was beautifully woven and incredibly told.)

This is fabulous! I can see every detail. Will there be a sequel or more to the story somehow?

Eeeeeeee! I love Marguerite and Roxton! I'm moving to Singapore, and will not get to watch it for three whole years. *Cries* I love your stories.-Lena(h), except no immatations.

Great story! Be sure to read mine coming out soon!

that's was cool. i liked it a lot. it was a great story. thanx for letting us read it.

After the third time through, this story is even more satisfying (if that's possible) and as complex as the woven tapestry you describe. Imaginative details of the other world, development of real relationships and your unique magic-it's just a wonderful read.

I know I personally e-mailed you when you submitted your Icy Kingdom,

but now that the site is finally back up, wanted to give you a repeat of my

review on the official site. As always, your writing is an inspiration to us
beginners. Your words flow so beautifully, with the descriptive phrases and
giving us the essence of each character's emotions. And, how brave of you

to make N&V the main couple. I know how much of an R&M shipper you are,

but with your talent you can make any character-related story come alive. This

is one of your masterpieces. I love your stories mostly because of the mystical

element you bring to each one. And, to hint again to our M's role of the 'chosen one
was sheer genius. So many wonderful scenes with all the characters, but I

especially loved the concern of M for R when she is spirited away to the 'kingdom
leaving Roxton sleeping alone in the jungle. What angst! Thank you, CalGal..

as always your beautifully written story held my interest from beginning to end.

that was such a great story where did u pluck that from !.x

This was a wonderful story, even if it was about Ned and Veronica, I'm a R&M fan if you can't tell. But this was wonderful. A bit long and detailed but extremely well written. IT really was and I recomend this to any one. Good job you!

Loved this story! This was good enough to be an actual episode, what am I saying it was better then some episodes I've seen. I love the fact that you gave Malone and Veronica their own type of romance story but still have essences of Roxton and Marguerite's growing relationship as well. I laughed at the part where Malone was remembering the couples first meeting and how Veronica told him that Summerlee had told her about it and mentioned that he knew then that Roxton and Marguerite were meant for eachother. It sounded like an observation Summerlee would make and have even voiced out loud. Loved the mention of his character as well. Great work!

That was great! I needed something so completely other worldly tonight. You have an amazing imagination. It is wonderful how you can create a completely new place. I loved Roxton exhausting himself over his friends like that. I hope the season permier writers think of something simliar. MK's worry was very convincing. V N were delightful together.

You know how much I love this story- EVERY one of your stories! I love the idea of the icy kingdom- the grain that could be made into everything, Malone and Veronica making up the story that they were married and had two kids, Marguerite drugging Roxton and then calling him "love god! I could go on forever! Everything was so well thought out, well written and so wonderful. I'm happy you finally got up the courage to post it! You shouldn't be so shy- you have a REAL talent for writing. Do you think your next fic could be a M&R one, though? Just wonderin'... Love ya!)

Amazing Story!

That was a lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work.