I noticed how you capitalized all male pronouns when referring to the Joker, almost like Harley sees him as a god, as any mention of "God" is always capitalized in the Bible.

Brilliant.

This... was absolute perfection. I haven't read a story written this well in a really, really long time. I absolutely love your prose and the whole deliciously dark overtone of this one-shot. You depicted the Joker and Harley's twisted relationship perfectly. I once read in a fic that the Joker is terrified of sex, terrified of the possible weakness it could make him feel... of the possible weakness that /Harley/ could make him feel. I think this one-shot epitomizes that idea. Although, don't get me wrong, I do hink the Joker was enjoying himself just as much as Harley was. That much was made clearly evident with the ending line. (Which I loved.)

Anyway, this was so sick and twisted and wrong but it was so /good/. Excellent job, princessebee.

Sincerely,

HoistTheColours

Loved it, especially the last line. And the whole giving head to the gun was incredibly unique and outrageously erotic. Good job!

whew! Oh my word.

I did not expect that to be as hot as it was in the end.

Lots of smiles,

J

Ok, wow, that was incredibly hot. I loved it .

u r a genius.

This was throbbingly hot.

...Wow, how do you think of this shit? You are a Goddess of your craft, fo realz, y'all.

As far as I can remember, that's exactly how it happened xP

This is an incredible piece of writing; you're obviously very talented :)

I love this story... it was hot, amazingly written... loved it.

Aha; THIS was the one!

A rather interesting take on Joker and Harley; never thought of THAT before! ;) But it worked. I like the way you've portrayed them here; he's always had a gun pointing at her, metaphorically speaking, and she's always been on her knees for him. Once again, metaphorically speaking.

So, once again, beautiful work, and I wish there were more!

AH! I am officially your stalker for all things related to the Joker. xD

Ah I loved this, only becuase the center of this mini-universe wasn't all about the Joker but about Harley. I mean of course, you really can't have a Harley without a Joker, and again you can see the obvious roles you see everywhere, Dominance and Submission. And again, his sadistic way of not only killing his victims but of even sexual encounters. Which is vaguely demonstrated in the show Mad Love - with hte whoopee cushion...lol, I dont even WANA know what they do with that xD.

I really like how you showed Harley's delusional devotion to him but the slight instances of contradiction where she proves herself to be capable of thinking for herself (ie: when she mentions shes a doctor) - though I wish their was a little more insight as to Harley's obsession. But thats just me, but if this was too be a little more sexy - then this is hella good! xD

Ahh again I love to incorporate my own little funniness into people's writings, and as soon as I saw where they were goin with that gun I thought "Whoa...what if Batman just...flew into the middle of that...talk about awkward situation xD".

And alas...my comments are always too long for their own good xD. All rite - I'll leave you to do your own thing!

P.S. Haha, forgot to mention, I liek the captial "H"s you used whenever Harley was talking about the Joker. As if she saw him in her eyes as a God...very clever I might add ;)

You know how to create such amazing imagery in your writing. That was perfection.

Why hasn't anyone thought of that? Why didn't I think of that? It's so obvious and brilliant in its simplicity. After all, men are always sexier holding guns. Everyone knows that. You're fantastic! Just wow! Blew my mind! HA! "Blew my mind." I crack me up.

Aside from the hotness, it was very well written. In the favorites list you go little story.

Excellent story. The Joker simply takes and Harley simply gives, and they are perfect for each other!