sad

o.O! Neither can I! STOP THAT. Ahem. -Shifty eyes
Anywho… Satoko that little bitch! Sorry… I've never liked Satoko… he reminds me too much of the WHORE Rachel Knobel (from my class T.T
Nice story! I'm not done with Kai yet, but I've finished the last arc in the original series, so of course I know what this is talking about…

You need to write some M rated violence! Woot woot!

Emmy-chan

well the scene that made me scream at my screen is now in text. you put it well, compensating well for the lack of the brutal pictures. nice job. thumbs up for you

and yea i was scratching my throat for a few weeks, its lessened now, after (and during) the show. it really starts to hurt after a while but its like biting your nails or sucking your thumb, you know ya shouldnt but ya just gotta.(sorry bout the off topic rant there)

Oh...Mah...GAWD!

I remember reading this at lunch! HOLY ...this is just an amazing piece of work! you really displayed the scene and the movements of the uncle,and the little girl's emotions. I absolutely loved how you described her while getting hit. It was so realistic and overall a frightening piece, but very moving. It made me wanna jump into the story, and whoop that uncle's freakin ass! lolz overall...I love what goes through your mind! u and ur amazing stories! keep it up girl!

luv ur Pocky buddie SesshyShadowSatoshiSonicXD

Very good, but it could hsve used a flood of bat-wielding Keiichis at the end beating the uncle to death at the end...or at least that would have made me feel better. Well written and detailed. Keep up the good work!

That was absoluetly yummy, Ayu-chama. X3 It was really sad but it fit the idea of the anime very well. Awesome work as usual

Wow. This story's really cool! Good job

lol, good story katrina, but u may need your emo pills, lol. But rly good)

Oh, wow! That so sad, Ayumi-chan. Even though I don't know who these people are. n.n; Great job as always! Please write more stuff soon!

lots of love, Cathy-chan

Sounds like something from the actual series! X3 Satoko's uncle is such a...a... 'tWantToAcknowledge! (Can't bring myself to say b-...ba-...Y'know). Poor Satoko...

And now for CC X3 I think your writing is really good and the story flows really well, and Satoko and Teppei are character and everything! But (yes, there is a "but" in here) the actual plot itself is kinda like...I dunno. It's not as symbolic as your other writing...it's all violence, no big symbols or themes unlike in your other writing (well, I know, the theme of child abuse, etc., but these themes were all addressed in the series, so don't think you can get out of this so easily X3). Still, it's good, keep writing!

And dun worry about Hinamizawa Syndrome...it's probably a misquito bite or something...or...hypocondria. Y'know, like, in school today, this one person said "lice" and everyone started scratching their heads. DX Me included. *scratches head and neck* GAH! 3

Now i wanna go watch Higurashi! This was really good! n.n Poor Satoko! Her uncle is MEAN AND EVIL! But this was good!