 nol-naru07 5/2/11 . chapter 1 when will you update?
I've been waiting for the next chapter for almost two years now... talk about cliff hanger...
I hope you update soon, I'm beginning to forget the sequence of events that happened in the story, could you make a recap of sorts next chapter tnx! |
 hisaki131313yahoo.com 3/12/11 . chapter 12 This is a good story.
The plot is pretty original compared to other fic in this fandom. It also has a good flow/pace. And the way you end each chapter is great, not really making the reader hanging in the middle of climax scene but still make us eager to know the continuation ASAP.
Thanks for writing this fic. I'll be waiting for an update. |
 sweetymai90 1/2/10 . chapter 12i love this story
it's well written
are you going to stop writting it?
please continue i really loved it |
 nollnaru17 6/9/09 . chapter 12 all in all the story is really AMAZING!
please...
update ASAP!
i really want to know the conclusion... |
 Moons-Chan 3/27/09 . chapter 12This is just like GH anime! They figured it out at one point and there's a lot of talking especially Naru, Mai and Yasuhara! Please update soon! |
 LunaxXmoongoddessXx 3/23/09 . chapter 11awesome, very detailed and awesome case, it's so interesting that so much are dying and they almost feel helpless, but i do look forward to an update soon |
 SimplyChristine 2/19/09 . chapter 11AH AN UPDATE!
Goodness, 20 ppl in a day eh? How deliciously bloody. 0_0 |
 Ayjah 2/18/09 . chapter 11WOW WOW WOW what a chapter) |
 Felling 1/5/09 . chapter 3It wasn't hard to find the black blob which sunk to the bottom of the nearly 4 meters deep swimming pool. With his pale, bare feet he touched the floor and simply remained there as if everything around him was air instead of the cold water. Mai slightly wondered if he wasn't affected by the cold temperature, while trying to keep her eyes open as she was beholding the lone figure underwater. Her mind arrived into a true reverie; a black clad Naru who was watching the water surface. He was so beautiful like that and she almost started to forget the world above her; they were alone again. She wished they could remain like that forever.
That was a amazing description. I could see it perfectly in my mind's eye. It was a amazing scene. It had me crying at the end. .;; |
 Kay 12/18/08 . chapter 10 AMAZING I am so curious as to what will happen in part c! |
 ravyncat 12/18/08 . chapter 10Hmm...I'm all kinds of confused. Hopefully to be cleared up with 9C. Granted I should also probably go back and re-read the last two chapters. I will do that tomorrow.
It seems like all sorts of malicious ghosts and spirits are hanging around the area. O_o
Wow...high body count with this story.
It is funny that the old book didn't put Mai to sleep, but the new one aimed at young adults did. XD Bash to Genma's ego...hahaha.
The bit with Gene and Mai was very interesting. I don't like the shady spirit being all chummy with him. It sounds very ominous with its 'I'll let you live...for now,' comment too. That makes me think it can hurt him even if he is a ghost. O_o
It's freaky that it gave him some sort of blade as well.
I don't really understand how Gene helped it...unless his link with Mai in her dreams allowed it access to the house. But if that was it...then why couldn't it just go inside the house on its own? Meep.
I'll be chewing on this for a while. D
I'm always happy to see updates from you. Will be looking forward to the next one as well. |
 Ayjah 12/18/08 . chapter 10wow creepy! |
 Moons-Chan 12/18/08 . chapter 10I don't really understand what's going on... So, please update soon! |
 Ayjah 10/20/08 . chapter 9wow poor Masako thrown into the middle of it all! |
 seiyuurabu 10/19/08 . chapter 9Looking forward to the next chapter! |