Once again, very nice. :-) Thanks!

~Em

Wow. Just...

Wow.

That was both hot *and* heartwrenchingly beautiful. Fantastic. Cain was sexier than I've ever read him portrayed. The thumb brush, and the dragging her down the hallway, and the blunt proposal. Wow.

Thank you!

~Em

Wow, I think I stopped breathing a little bit during that...

Actually, I think the part I found sexiest was the little "thumb slip" at the beginning, helping her off the horse. :D

“And you’re going to marry me. I mean it. I don’t do things half way.” That has to be about the most unromantic purposal, or right up there, that I've ever read. Still, it sounds just like Cain, and if I apply the words to his voice, it's not unromantic just blunt. I can't believe he thought she was flirting with his son, but I guess love does funny stuff to us. Do you happen to write erotic fiction for a living, because you're way good at it. The last scene especially was wickedly creative without ever getting into 'eww, gross' territory. Thumbs up.

That? Was fantastic!

Okay, I've read this a million billion times since I came into the fandom just about a month or so ago. I'm so psyched that you added on to it. Dominant Wyatt is just so...guh!

Just...wow. This is mindblowingly *fantastic*. I love your characterizations of Cain and DG and the portrayal of what they share, from their most tender moments to the downright scorching love scenes. Wonderfully done!

You so HAVE to keep these going! PHEW! I LOVE THIS! :D

*guh* *thud* Iz ded wow i mean... just wow... *thud again*

Oh my Lord. Whew! That was beyond hot. I felt so bad for DG when Cain got upset with her at first for using the handcuffs. But I think they more than made up for it afterwards. I loved that Cain did as she asked of him and kept his hands up. Nice to see the Tin Man relinquishing control to her once in a while. Very sexy. Thanks for the addition.


Jaime

Loved it yes pay back always love those
Maria

Wow. Poor DG never stood a chance. ^_^
I really liked this story. Your Cain is awesome! DG was hilarious as always, and the plot was cute. It's nice to see Cain as the seducer instead of the other way around. Can't wait to read more from you,

Yang

*slowly picks jaw back up off of desk...where it has been laying for the past fifteen minutes*

H O L Y - S H I T S K I

*and still struggling to form a coherent thought*

Alright...

Um...

*exhales*

Gimme a minute, I'm catching my breath...

Right, explanation/feedback...

So, someone who favorited my stories favorited yours as well, I rarely ever get time to read fics since I'm always writing them myself... and I have GOT to say, it was FANTASTIC good luck that I stumbled across this when I finally decided to try and read something.

This was on a level BEYOND incredibly well written. This was devastatingly erotic and I swear my brain is absolute MUSH right now.

It may take me a few days to recover from this LOL And for that, I thank you! Excellent fic, my dear! MWAH!

Oh.. my Gosh! Wow.. I don't have much to say except wow, and that was awesome.

I L-O-V-E-D loved it! That was a new spin on Wyatt Cain that you pulled off very very nicely. 5 stars WAY WAY up! Keep up the great work!