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| Sammyluvr83 2008-04-08 ch 4,  | abuseguess Sam's not too keen on having a sister! cant wait for more! |
| Strangler000 2008-02-07 ch 4, | abuseI like what I've read so far, even if it is mostly information regarding the story and not actual story. Please keep writing more! |
| Chicki Babie 2008-02-07 ch 4, | abusewanna find out about rebeka update soon |
| noname32 2008-02-07 ch 4, | abuseGood job i like it alot. please give a description and age when you introduce the sister.Update soon! |
| the-bella-malfoy 2008-02-03 ch 3, | abuseAhh! Cliff hanger style. Good job. |
| noname32 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abuseGOod job i like it alot, I think sam and dean should be loving to their sister and sam should be upset but kinda not about learning he has a sister. Cant wait for next update. |
| noname32 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abusesounds intersting... I would have the brothers and even john, since she is the only girl be procective. I think also Rebekah should be strong, sarcastic/funny and pretty. Cant wait for next update. |
| noname32 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHey this sounds like ti will be a great story. I like that she is young 18. I think you should introduce in the sister during the shadow episode and have mention of her in home about if they have heard from her, I think the brothers should know about her. They know her from youth and maybe met her when she was born come across her through the year like age two, six and know eighteen. Therefore the brothers can still show love and proctectivness since they saw her grow up somewhat and see her as the baby. I hope that Helps GOOD LUCK! |
| hotforjensen101 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abuseI love it great start |
| Chicki Babie 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abusei think sam was a little shocked lol update soon wanna find out what happens when they meet their sista |
| Sammyluvr83 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abuseamazing!! great start! |
| the-bella-malfoy 2008-01-31 ch 2, | abuseI think the sister idea could really work if you do it the right way. And I am definitely all for a story like this. Just make sure that the story has a good solid backing too it, make it believable..you know? That and I really like the name you chose for her. :D |
| Stand In Girl 2008-01-31 ch 2, | abuseMy honest advice to your original question is, don't make a sister-fic. I've never seen one that didn't turn into the author's own personal fantasy with the sister being just like the writer, except amplified and perfected. If you DO decide to continue with the story, just be careful to avoid the horrible black pit of Mary-Suedom that most people tend to fall into. Make her REAL, and I would advise against modeling her after yourself. Good luck either way. |
| Chicki Babie 2008-01-31 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon |
| fangsangel 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI think that thier sister should come in during the episode "Bloody Mary". She could be friends of one of the daughters at the beginning. Dean and Sam just kind of accidentaly meet her there. |