I LOVE THIS STORY. MY FATHER DIED ON NOVEMBER 15TH, 2006, AT THE AGE OF 75. THANKS FOR POSTING.

YOU DID A GREAT JOB. THIS IS WHAT ROMANCE IS ALL ABOUT.
I LOVE SEEING WHEELER AND LINKA TOGETHER.

oh i loved it!

can't wait to read your next one

Cheers
AJ

This story is great. I hope the last chapter comes soon. I just have a question. The thing about Linka messing up cliches and then being corrected by Wheeler, How often in the show was that done? Because while I see it a lot in Fanfiction, I only remember it happening in the show once. It went something like this: Linka says, "Let's Airplane."
Then Wheeler responded by saying, "That's 'Let's Jet' Linka, but 'Let's Airplane' is kind of cute, like you."

I can't believe you're adding another chapter! You're an angel.

Ah, I was wondering who would come...for some reason I thought Ma-ti would come but then duh, of course Gi would be the best choice. I liked how Gi talked Linka through but the way you opened the chapter up was really, very touching. *grin* I can't wait to see how you end this fic, I thought the way Linka apologies to Wheeler was very cute ;)

Wow, 2 chapters in one day! Can't wait to see what you have planned for the ending.

boy, drunk linka really knows how to make a spectacle of herself, doesn't she? O.o i hope she doesn't remember half this stuff in the morning, or she will feel like crap... nah, never mind. at this point i'm not entirely sure that's a bad thing. i'm still pretty mad at her behavior with french fry dude, so...

and speaking of french fry dude, i think wheeler should've stayed a bit longer and maybe kicked him around a bit more. the sleazy bastard, ugh.

but you know, it's the little details that make this fic for me :) joey was absolutely adorable in this chapter-- i loved the bit about a roach motel and when he told linka he wasn't supposed to like girls yet. and trish's prince charming analogy... i guess it's not so glamorous when the prince is actually running around manhattan carrying around a drunk girl, huh? the irony just killed me there. great job as always, and i'm waiting for the next one-- that'll be the last part, wasn't it?

*claps* Yay, a new chapter! Great job, I love how you write Prince Charming Wheeler...it's always nice to see him ;) Loved the scene at the end, I can't wait to see how Linka reacts...I bet she'll be embarassed. Next chapter please ^__^

read both chapters loved them both

hope linka isn't too mad when she wakes up

Cheers
AJ

Oh no, a love square ^^; I do like the idea of Linka and Wheeler sorting their relationship out in the middle of a family drama, it leaves Wheeler vulnerable and allows Linka to see that side of him. Next chapter please!

i guess i'm biased, but i'm really ** off at linka right now. she's totally over-reacting! poor wheeler :( it was totally not the right time or place, and she should've seen that he's not really with trish anyway. but ah, well, i guess jealousy can do that to you... it's just that then she went off with french fry guy (i don't particularly like him at all) and it made me really mad. but i'm sure they'll work it out.

i really loved the first part of the chapter, when they were talking about linka's parents. and there were little moments that made me squee, like the planeteers 'volunteering' linka, and her helping wheeler with his tie (so cute!). great job! i'll be on the look-out for the next chapter.

Wow and update! So it's only the 3rd part that's left cause you already wrote the 4th (last) part. Great job!

Great job! Please update soon. :)

very good storie

i like seeing a softer side to Wheeler, even if his father was an **.


Hope to see more soon

Cheers
AJ