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| Blazing Fury 2008-07-23 ch 13, | abuseI have to say that this is a really interesting crossover. I really love the idea that you have here, in my opinion it's much more interesting and fleshed out then the Naruto cast going to Hogwarts to protect Harry. I'm really liking your interactions between Naruto and Harry. I like how you have Harry as a older brother figure for Naruto. It's a well done relationship in my opinion as they are indeed very similar. I've liked how you've sped up the timeline of the Harry Potter universe. I'm really looking forwards to Harry travelling to Konoha, and Naruto and Harry meeting in person. So the veil of death links to Konoha then I'd assume? I have to say that I really like this story. I'll be watching this for another chapter. Great Job! |
| White Ivy 2008-07-21 ch 13, | abuseIt's been several months since this story has been updated. I sincerely hope that I haven't come across such a good story only to learn that it has been discontinued...*sigh* Anyway, I bet I know why Sirius escaped in Harry's 1st year instead on his 3rd! It's because Scabbers was in the photograph taken of Harry at the train station, right? Sirius must have seen it. Please update!! |
| Cristalake 2008-07-18 ch 10, anon. | abuseCould Lee be a Wizard? I've had that thought before. What if he has undervelopped chakra coils but can use wandless magic (to an extent) ! That would be so cool! |
| firedrizzt 2008-06-26 ch 13, | abuseI have a feeling this story is going to be an EPIC or really good |
| dhrachth 2008-06-16 ch 13, | abuseI agree with you on trying to keep wizards and ninja about equal, and I think that's do-able when you're talking a strict power to power comparison. But in terms of fighting, I can't think there's any possible way wizards could be a match for ninja. It's a question of training. Wizards aren't soldiers, they're civilians--they're not trained to fight outside of the most basic schoolyard brawling type spells (Jellylegs for instance). Add to that the DADA professor curse, and the recent generations aren't even that well trained. Ninja, on the other hand, are trained from childhood on in how to kill people and most of them that are a year or two out of the academy have probably done so at least a time or two. Even aurors and deatheaters aren't really equipped for life and death battles. Aurors are basically a police force. Police are not soldiers, they focus on investigation and subduing individual criminals--pitched battles are outside their training. Deatheaters, although practiced killers, seem to mostly target civilian wizards and muggles, people who can't put up much of a fight. Granted, put an average second year genin up against a seasoned auror, and the auror, if they don't underestimate their opponent too much, is going to be able to kick the kid's **. Fighting deatheaters and other criminals is bound to have taught them a few tricks. But put that same genin up against any wizarding civilian and the genin is going to have the edge because wizards are just not in anyway battle trained or ready but the genin has probably been in few real fights with real casualties. That's not to say wizards are useless. Wizard healing seems to be miles ahead of anything I've seen in Naruto. Portkeys, floo, & apparition are much faster methods of travel and communication than ninjas can manage. The animagus transformation is another really cool thing wizards can do but ninja can't. Ninja don't seem to have any kind of warding capabilities--something they'd probably love to know how to do. Plus there are all those many many creature comfort spells. Basically, ninjas are specialists that devote all their strength and skill with chakra to being better fighters where wizards are generalist that use magic for anything they can imagine applying it to. When put in those terms, if you make the two even in a fight you're actually short changing the ninjas. If ninja focus on just this one purpose while the wizards kind of half heartedly throw it in with all their other school subjects and the two groups still come out with the same basic results, it makes the ninja look awfully foolish. That being said, I'm really enjoying the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Elion of the Black Sunrise 2008-06-15 ch 13, anon. | abusePlease update! This is really good! |
| blue-tempest 2008-06-07 ch 13, | abusethe relationship between naruto and harry is just so cute i really can't wait to read more. |
| Nabiki 2008-06-03 ch 13, anon. | abuseplease continue to write this story please because it is one of best crossovers I have read in a long time please I'm begging you to continue to write and finish it.! |
| freohr 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuseThis is a really great fic and I enjoyed reading it from the beginning, but now I want more so get to writing! |
| berkie88 2008-05-26 ch 13, | abuseit looks like you are doing years 1 and 3 in one year, so if Harry leaves at the end of his 3rd year h will have his 3rd year to get rid of Voldemort... maybe his 2nd too if you cut the Chamber of Secrets as short as his first year. too bad the Triwizard Tournament won't be done now... though I'm interested in the Chunin exams and how he'll explain his arrival when he goes to Naruto! if Harry leaves then he'll have to leave his friends behind as well... as well as Remus and Sirius... though I don't know how close you'll make them. but Sirius is his godfather so if he ever gets the chance to meet him and find out I'm not sure he'd want to leave him behind considering family is important to him... hope you'll continue soon! |
| I Am Rolf 2008-05-21 ch 13, | abusenot a bad story keep it up |
| L'uke-chan 2008-05-09 ch 13, | abuseAwesome story. Trully brilliant-grin-Though I still don't get one thing. Can Harry do jutsus in his world? I mean the water jutsus, henge, sexy-no-jutsu and etc. And could you describe how Harry and Naruto look like? And don't they get the urge to speak the others language? I mean yeah, they don't speak them now and everything, but still, when they're angry or something don't they slip? Well anyways! Luv the story and can't wait for the next update-grin- |
| Limericks 2008-05-09 ch 9, | abuseHello, just found your story today and I really enjoy the plot and the characterization. I think this is one of the best Naruto/Harry Crossovers. I'm really happy that they have that support system with each other. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have a few questions for this story, will harry ever get Hedwig( i love that owl)? if he did will he be able to send a message to naruto? Are you going to resolve the sirius issue during their first year? Hope you update soon. Thanks so much for your story:) |
| notBald 2008-05-06 ch 13, | abuseThis is a nice original take on the old crossover. Good work. |
| Ms Arano 2008-05-04 ch 13, | abuseUh, wow! You actually managed to inorporate info!dumps without making them seem out of place. Kudo's for you! I like this scenario you have going with Big Brother Harry and the glimpses of I Have A Personality Neville (He's so unloved, really), and just how you set everything up with the breaching of realities and all. Just... wow! With all this said, you're probably made out of awesome xD |