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| Tia Cullen 2008-09-19 ch 17,  | abuseTHat was great...keept writing. but chapter 18, every time i click on it, it only comes up with a paragraph and a sentance that has been cut off. did you write it like tnhat, or is it my computer? Anywhoo...i liked it better than the real BD |
| Starr.sky1988 2008-09-15 ch 18, | abusei am not sure if this story is finished or if you havent gotten to it. it seems to me like u stopped in the middle of a story. its great this is what i was expecting when i bought breaking dawn. in my oppion its a bad fan fiction. its true and sad. thanx i also enjoy your other stores. |
| MyAngel56 2008-09-06 ch 18, | abusei love this story u really have to continue |
| JenRar 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abuseAside from a few grammatical errors, great chapter and can't wait to read more. :) |
| lynn 2008-08-28 ch 8, anon. | abusemore edward more edward can you write a couple of sequels or at least twenty more chapters because this is so addicting i need more |
| lynn 2008-08-28 ch 4, anon. | abusei findyour version very in interesting and almost has meanigful as the actual breaking dawn. but i would like to ask if you sent this to a parent or someone to edit cause i found some spelling corrections that may have been overlooked. I am sorry to say this but i dislike jacob with a great deal of passion, he always has confused over is intentions. i hope you find this helpful. p.s.sorry for the critisisim |
| edwardcullen4evr 2008-08-08 ch 18, | abuseI really like it. Hope you're continuing! |
| prinitha joseph 2008-08-05 ch 18, anon. | abuseI think your story is awsome but you have repeated a few lines from twilight,new moon and eclipse. Avoid that and your a great author! |
| Sophie 2008-07-30 ch 18, anon. | abuseThat was the most amazing story I've ever read. I thought it was the actual story. It was very entertaining. I couldn't take my eyes off. I really would like for you to write more. |
| supersceneesterMOMO 2008-07-28 ch 18, | abusei absolute loved it and i think bella should also have the power to manipulate things to happen like in her mind she pictures it and it happens Just a sujestion i love it still tho!! |
| supersceneesterMOMO 2008-07-27 ch 7, | abuseHoly Shizzils! That was to the extream intent and amazin love i loved it and i thought it was perfectly perfect ^_* |
| supersceneesterMOMO 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseits em azin love |
| Crow 2008-07-25 ch 18, anon. | abuseIs that it?? I enjoyed it all a little to much i think do you plan on writing. By the way amazing job. |
| jessbess47 2008-07-25 ch 18, | abuseHiya just thought i'd let u know that I think you're doing a fab job keep it up can't wait for the next post |
| mattybabe 2008-07-22 ch 18, | abusebrilliant story keep it up :D |