Angsty maybe, but so well written. I really felt for Alanna here.

One small thing, but important I think. Faithful: "...the cat takes control of it's own destiny."

Should be its. Sort of like 'his' doesn't get written as hi's. 'It's' is really only ever a contraction of 'it is'.

But like I said, one very small thing. This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading.

Lovely, a really nice piece on Alanna's feelings toward her brother before and after death. I love it, you really understand Alanna's character

Um. Wow, I don't really love Alanna as a fanfiction character, but this was great! It really shows a different side to her... made me think...
Shang Leopard

i've read this, so why haven't i reviewed already? ... meh. sorry.

King Johnny needs a good slap. poor 'Lanna...

loved it! (in a depressing, this is insanely good way)

Sure it's random but it'sreally good

Wow, that's really really interesting. I liked how you had Alanna analyze the relationships she had with those who died on that day, and her thoughts about her brother, her other half are extremely well done. I love your Alanna drabbles, they open up a new side to her, and I think you do it in a convincing way. A couple of things I'd like to point out: About halfway down you write "Guess what? It doesn't work." And I found that jarring because it's kind of modern/slang and it seems like you change POV, having her talk to a real person and ask a rhetorical question rather than have her just tell her own story. Also, it's a little babbly (like you said), but if you chopped it down and made it more focused it would be wonderful. One more thing, I really thought the tone was clear and accurate. Overall, good job, Ari! ^^

Wow. That was very god even if i do feel rather depressed now...

Very good.

Brilliant!

Though it was really sad (of course it was,its angst! ^^) I love the way that you put some humour in (like dunking Thom's head in the pond) and I think that it showed a deeper side to the Lioness.

Also I thoroughly agree with Jon's description! Selfish prig.

-Jess-

that was incredible - you have real skill

This was (as usual:) VERY good, although a bit depressing which actually is what angst means, so why i'm slightly surprised, i dunno... lol I really liked how you brought together everyone who died that day, and how "even george leaves me alone on that day" :) Amazing work, that's all i can say...

Can't wait to hear anything else random (I am, you understand, the queen of randomness and nonsense )

update asap!! :D
Cheers,
Mickeygee