how old are they all?

i wish that there was more edward and balla love goin on i dont think that they experess there feelings as much as the others...?

"I AM GOD"
lol WTF?

I think this chapter was great! Nice job of planning it Edward, lol. :)

Good chapter :)

Interesting... I wonder what the animal is... keep up the good work, by the way! :)

I liked this chapter and by the looks of this sneak peek the next one sounds good! ^^

This chapter was great! <3

Yay! That was a fun chapter! :D Good Work!

This chapter was good! ^^ :)

Yes, this helped. Thanks! :)

This chapter was good :)

Jasper and Alice have found eatchother! Yay! The mates have found eatchother, yay! ^^ Keep up the good work!

Wow... this interesting, can't wait! ^^ Good so far!

Your story is amazing. I just started reading it so I can't say that I'll be leaving any time soon. I'll keep reading, and you should continue writting, you're good. Can't wait for the next update! :D