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wolfdemon22
2009-11-03 . chapter 33
nice chapter cant wait till the next one
Manga Girl number 6
2009-10-29 . chapter 33
Ah... another excellent chapter of total awesomeness!
Can't wait for more!
MG#6
Darkangel Guard
2009-10-29 . chapter 33
Hé!

How are you?

Well, I'm sorry I don't have much to say about this chapter...lots of battle and all.

Sorry, but I did want to let a review so don't throw vegetables at me lol.

I just hope to see all the plans you have for us, and the continuation between Yuna and Seymour. Love powa please!

So, see you and thank for posting so soon. I'm behind you, don't give up!

Kisses,

DG.
meiko
2009-10-25 . chapter 32
hope everything goes well with your health. sorry to hear about that but please when you can, continue writing!!-God Bless
josh
2009-10-25 . chapter 29
very good! more please (:
Manga Girl number 6
2009-10-21 . chapter 32
Thanks for the chappie dedication. I loved the chapter... too bad for Seymour, being a half-formed aeon. But now the battle against Sin is nigh.
CAN'T WAIT!
MG#6
forbiddenfantasy
2009-10-20 . chapter 32
Sorry to hear about the health problems. glad to hear ur better. the picture is going along slowly but i want it to look good. plz update soon!
Lucrecia LeVrai
2009-10-17 . chapter 32
It's good to see your story's not over yet! Although, I can already see the end approaching – and I'm holding my breath in anticipation.

The previous chapter was beautiful, but I just can't believe that Seymour really became an aeon! I still can't get over it, regardless of the fact that it was a great plot twist. I know why he did something so extreme and I like his new, majestic shape, name and power, but I liked his previous appearance better (no wonder here). At least he should still be able to appear in the form of a ghost-like fayth, like all other aeons do, though perhaps not until his transformation is complete.

Now I wonder if eating a chocobo isn't even worse than eating a fiend. :) It's like eating a horse or a dog – people around the world eat them, but personally, I'd never try horsemeat unless I was starving. In other Final Fantasy games monsters aren't necessary people's dead ancestors (in FF8, they came from the moon, etc.), so eating them for dinner might be okay. Who knows, maybe they do have some 'normal' animals on Spira, other than chocobos. I clearly remember normal birds in FF8 and FF9, they could just roast them – and spare such cute creatures as tiny ochu. *cough*

Enough of this food talk, already! As mentioned in the beginning, I really can't wait to see what happens next. Short as it was, I liked the scene at Mount Gagazet very much, and I wonder what will happen to Spira after the battle with Sin is over, now that the peoples of Spire are fighting among themselves.

I hope you're already well, or at least steadily recovering from your health problems, and will be able to continue soon. :)
Darkangel Guard
2009-10-16 . chapter 32
Hello dear! I'm back! As promised, I'll try to review enven if I skipped few things.
So...well! I'm so disapointed! Why did Seymour did this bullshit by all the saints! Like...hell! Couldn't he just talk with his wife? Geez...
Can a humain do something with a aeon by the way? ^^' Sorry, bad joke.
Well, it seems also taht the story is coming to an end...and we all know that the aeons will desappear. Do you have a plan B or something?
It's so a pity that there's no Happy End if not! TT
Well, I'm impatient to discover the next. Please, be faster this time and save Seymour/Yuna! I beg you so deeply!
Well, to finish, I'll say big kisses to you and see you soon I hope. Still a great fan of yours, never forget ^^!
Bisous!
Kick-It-Aus Style-Mal's
2009-10-16 . chapter 32
OH Gods he became an aeon*Feint*
OH gods his half formed,can he turn back.So many questions right more!!
Foreveralone16
2009-10-15 . chapter 32
Got a little lost near the end but this chapter was freakin awesome! *sniff* Noes Seymour is an aeon! By the way you're really good at fight scenes. Love the chapter. ;)

Update real soon, kay? -Lone-chan
forbbiddenfantasy
2009-10-15 . chapter 32
YAY! u UPDATED! i'm so happy i'm drawing a picture of Yuna and Seymour in his bethemoth state! i'll try to put it on deviantart ASAP. Keep going your doing real well!
wolfdemon22
2009-10-15 . chapter 32
awsome chapter cant wait to see what happens next ^^
forbbiddenfantasy
2009-10-10 . chapter 31
WHAT HAPPENS?!? ARGH! I NEED TO KNOW!
Manga Girl number 6
2009-10-06 . chapter 31
Wow... Seymour's an aeon!
Cool.
MG#6
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