you know. . . .this was extremely cute and I would LOVE to read more of it!

I love this story and your writing style.

Eric?
*laughing my head of*

Loved the pregnant thing and the fan girls episode. The chapter was good and, of course, if the team predicted that Oliver and Katie were meant for each other the families had to. Love Blake's character, if this story isn't dead I hope you let him play a bigger part.

Ok, so again, I'm sure as a girl you loved the snogging...anyways... not a bad chapter, I loved the portrait you pain of the families, they fit perfectly with Oliver and Katie's characters. Good chapter, loved it as always

Ok, I just opened this chapter to check length after reviewing the last chapter. I have to get to class so I don't have time to read it, but I did want to thank you for the quote from me and Wes I had so forgotten that. Oh band

Ok so slightly more girlish than I wanted to get into, but I can't say I'm not a slight romantic at heart so I enjoyed it.

Quidditch in her stomach? That certain sounds like the future of this story could definitely be interesting.

I love that she missed it when he said he loved her the first time, as well as joint custody of Harry. Oh and you used magic to unpack the bags, I'm so proud of you for remembering magic. Loved it and am glad that the next chapter is up and so not really a cliffe

Counting steps in sets of 8 huh... hmm I wonder where that comes from? Like the chapter and Katie and Oliver's relationship growing. I liked vex getting his, but think a nice hex would have been nice. Sometimes you avoid standard wizarding conventions like hexes and potions> I'm glad you don't go too far and use them to fix everything, taking the human element out, but some more would be nice. Loved the chapter, but am sad that Eric is no more, every time she called him that I had to laugh a little.

Only you would think to give them chicken pox. I would think there might be a wizarding cure to get rid of something like that, but I'm assuming that your remark about them mainly being a muggle thing was to address that. And, no offense, but you have to immerse yourself in the wizarding world more and stop relying on muggle things like advil. Loved the chapter, made me laugh out loud several times.

I think Blake and Oliver shouldn't have given in so easily about Vex. And apparation is slightly loud, wouldn't Oliver have wanted to know who just came in, or was that what he was coming in to ask. I think when he opened the door the initial shock would have turned quickly into a "WHAT THE HELL!" moment that would have make Vex leave before Katie had a chance to tell him to do so. Sets up for something interesting though. And I would like to see how long it takes Oliver to realize what Katie has recently begun to see, even if she doesn't realize it yet.

Ok so the critique first.

The quidditch game was going good, and not to say they don't have the talent to get 160 to zero (this is your team so you're the only one who really knows how good they are), but I know the other team would be doing anything to get that gap closed. The Falcons seeker probably would be stopping Rae from getting the snitch. I know that in book four Krum goes for the snitch even though it means losing, but that game was out of hand and only getting worse, but this game was different. If they were to score once they could tie and Puddlemere was holding so I bet they think they have a chance to get that one at some point. Sorry for that, but you know I'm a sports fan and that struck me as strange.

Anyways, I still loved the quidditch game and Rae's mean side showing through at the end. I'm interested to see what you do with Rae now that she's "more comfortable" with Katie. And I want to see what Oliver does about Vex

Oh and Vex made me think vampire when he disappeared like a shadow, that's how I imagined him disappearing anyways, and was stealthily around the corner waiting in the dark for his 'victim.' It's like he lured Katie to him. Well this has been entirely too long of a review so adios.

You're doing a great job making the relationships believable. I loved Katie's answers at the press conference and Oliver just grinning.

I like the way the article came out, it develops everything nicely. No offense, but if that's how girls are when they get together then how can anyone think a group of women would run the world better? ;)