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| Maire blaze 2008-08-24 ch 21, | abuseVeranda: Aw, my dear boy don't you know the answere to life the universe and everything is 42? Ember: Not bad... Marie: But Polly is a girl... Ally doesn't like Ed that way; she's like hinata, she blushes at stuff randomly. Ember: And for his Jerky-ness Julep wouldn't punch an injured person. Marie: but the ending was good. Both: Havoc sleeping in the food... Priceless! Keep up the good writing! The blaze sisters, Alchemists and authors |
| MoonStarDutchess 2008-07-23 ch 21, | abuse100 100 100 Dun dun dun! Good job! |
| sutapets 2008-07-18 ch 21, | abuseIt's the end already? Aw man! I wish I wasn't grounded from the computer. -- lol-ing makes the world go round... |
| Right Is Never Wrong 2008-07-14 ch 21, | abuseAww thats sad that it's over...and sorry me and Miki haven't had a chance to review in awhile...there were some out side facters interfering...some of which had nothing to do with the computer... So beacuase of those 'issues' Miki isn't able to be here with me today...is it just me or dose it sound like she dead lol, Miki's fine her parents are getting divorced so we both kinda forgot about FF for awhile... Well we both LOVED the story, you did an AMAZING job and it was one of those stories that the idea just drew you in, an amazing story you did a wpnderful job and deserve more credit then I can give... Well now i'm off to review a few more stories i've missed over the time I haven't been on, and then to help Miki unpack in her new house... -Signed Ashley |
| CreativebutLazy 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abusefirst off I promise I will read the rest of that other story I was reading (there are a lot of stories I started reading and haven't finished yet, and I can't believe I started another one) I've been in a writing mood rather than a reading mood lately (problem is I also have writers block) second that was hilarious! Okay since I haven't read the rest I don't know if someone already suggested something like this but it's something I've always wanted to see done. one of my friends did this in her story but it was OOC and I'm dying to see it done IC. So here it goes. Ed, I dare you to sing "I'm a Barbie Girl" while wearing a pink barbie dress in front of the whole military (including Roy) and with a smile on your face (no matter how much you want to kill you're self on the inside) oh and if he does do this make sure Winry gives him a nice reward (I'm a big Edwin fan) -CbL |
| sutapets 2008-07-01 ch 19, | abuseHiya! I know I'm new here and all but, I couldn't resist! Gluttony: Eat a jar of ube jam in one gulp. (Everyone else, stand back, he'll explode in a sugar high. (That is, if he is a guy) Everyone who cares: I don't really know too much about this anime except a certain someone. So can anyone explain to me what this is all about?(Pretty obvious though) |
| dancing-lover 2008-06-30 ch 20, | abuseAww. Since you didn't do your's, Envy. You now have to run around in a tutu and a tiara with a bubble wand shouting "LORD KIRA!" Ed, I dare you to record him doing so. Roy, since you did your dare, I just dare you to sit/ stand where you are and just be awesome. Falman, what is the answer to the ultimate question of life, the universe, and everything? Oh, and sorry if I offended you Ed. :3 Thank you. dancing-lover |
| Island Of the Ships 2008-06-30 ch 20, | abuseoh right, me and nature got in that arguement like two months ago... forgot about that... anyways: everybody: please stop treating roy better than everyone else with the dares. it's very annoying, and your biases killed what could've been some very entertaining material. so please, make roy do his dares, because everyone else is forced (in envy's case, threatened at weapon-point) to do them. al: again, stop being in denial about your love for cats. ed: go contemplate something useful envy: i dare you to go cliff jumping. it's very fun. riza: here's a coupon for a trip to a hot spring. i dare you to use it yourself and not give it to someone. now go. roy: stop pill popping and do your physical therapy greed: are you still alive? i forget if you've died or not... anyways, go impale ed on a yucca whether he thinks it's possible or not. make it work! have fun you still very silly people! |
| Sonar[not signed in] 2008-06-30 ch 20, anon. | abuseNot bothering to sign in. I just need some cheering up. *drinks some water* Scar I guess I was just a bit frustrated so I apologize if I took it out on you. *hugs Scar and then backs off a bit* Is your face all right? Looked like something hit you between the eyes. Do you think of the people you killed? By the way, I'm considering you my friend. Is there more to you than meets the eye? [honestly, I think you have another side if you had saved Al though you gave the stone to his body. Makes me wonder if you knew that you were going to die] Did you really want to die at one point after your brother did? Honestly, I wish you did not die in the anime. At least you are alive in the manga. Sunna Sorry for the hole. You could always have Ed fix it. He is good at alchemy. Dorochet *hugs Dorochet* I dare you to sing any sing you actually know. I need some cheering up. How sharp is that sword of yours? Honestly, as you were working with Greed, what did you think of him? I dare you to do something you would never do and enjoy it. Roy Worse name ever been called besides "Useless"? How did you react when you learned more about the truth of Ishbal? What is your guilty pleasure? [same question to Havoc] I dare you to provoke Fuery to get angry just once. Breda *takes the puppy off Breda's head before he freaks out* Aw...it's so cute but it makes me miss my dog. I dare you to spike Riza's coffee while she isn't looking. I dare you to show up to work in a red suit. Fuery *hands Fuery the puppy while looking away.* Okay..maybe not over the loss of my dog yet. Anyways, I got at least one dare for you. I dare you to do a very silly dance. I dare you to pull a small prank on anyone in the room and make it seem that someone else did it. Havoc Chill..got something for you. *hands Havoc a tray of muffins. You just settle down and relax all right? Suffering any symptons from the withdrawal of smoking? [cause it looks like you were having mood swing] I dare you to tell everyone a joke. |
| Akira Phoenix & Hikami Haru... 2008-06-30 ch 20, anon. | abuseAkira: Wow..a story to check out. Hikami: Now no torturing Havoc. akira: No worries. I only got one dare for him really. Hikami: Really? Akira: I dare him to act out of character for a whole chapter. Hikami: Well that is nice. Akira: He needs to be free. Hope he doesn't find my glider. Hikami: Wait, you brought a glider? Akira nods and chuckles. Hikami: anyways, we dare Fuery to dress in casual clothes for 2 whole chapters. Akira: Breda and Falman, act like rebels for a whole chapter. |
| A Crazed sue 2008-06-30 ch 20, anon. | abuseTucker *places rabbit ears on his head and runs* BE LUCKY YOU ARE EVEN MENTIONED IN A STORY! Dorochet *shoots a dart at his behind and blames it on Greed* Heh, I dare you to do some sword throwing but shoot swords at something and not at someone. Falman I dare you to pull a prank on Full Metal but don't get caught. |
| deepsleep47 2008-06-08 ch 18, | abuse(please ignore the abusive review I sent in for "The Assassins") I dare everyone in the room to: 1.)jump up and down on one foot 2.)rub your stomach 3.)pat your head 4.)spin around in a circle and 5.)sing "Numa Numa," "Hamster Dance," and "Crazy Frog" AT THE SAME TIME! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH*cough*cough*cough*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! please an' thanx ya, -deepsleep47 P.S. again, sorry for the abusive response |
| Right Is Never Wrong 2008-06-02 ch 18, | abuseAshley: Miki was the one who came up with all the death ideas! I was the one typing... Miki: who of course did nothing! Ashley: Shut up! Busy with my stories...which are sadly lacking updatedness... MIki: You have noone to blame but yourself... Ashley: And you... Miki: -Glare- Whatever! Ashley: Sorry about the EXTREAME latness on this...Miki over there forgot to tell me you'd updated... Miki: Wasn't MY fault! Ashley: Course it wasn't... Miki: Shut up! Ashley: :) Gottan love life! Edward, I dare you to eat a box of RITZ crakers in less then a minute or else...I'LL EAT CAFFEINE!! MIki: Gods no... Ashley: MUAHAHAHAHAHA! MIki: Life is over as we know it... Roy, I dare you to...pretand to be telepathic till the end of the chapter... Ashley: I'm telepathic... Miki: We already know.. Ashley: It's scary knowing what gose on in Ben's brain...REALT scary...that guy has some disturbing images...at least once in awhile...most of the time he's highly sceptical...funny enough... Winry, I dare you to fix to caps lock button on Miki's dad's computer...his whole computer is screwed... Miki: You can't even FIND the question mark! Ashley: So funny... Wow this is the shortest we've had in a while... Miki: Not realy...you know that last storry...okay then Ashley you can stop attempting to kill me... Ashley: I finished FMA: Broken Angel yesterday... Miki: WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Ashley: Hehe I shan't tell you what happend...lol funny Miki: I'M HURTING YOU! Ashley: Sure you will...I think i'll prevail if I have caffeine... MIki: KAMA HELP US! Ashley: KAMA MIZU! Miki: WTB?!?!?! Ashley: I'm being random... Miki: I can see that... |
| deepsleep47 2008-05-26 ch 17, | abuseYAY! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! ^ ^ |
| Maire blaze 2008-05-23 ch 18, | abuseVeranda: you had to list that out didn’t you twerp? Ember: all right, and just when you had started to redeem yourself... (Sigh.) Veranda: if some less evolved monkeys had read my story, they would realize that I plainly showed the burning method. As to my own weakness level... I have no intention of telling you. Marie: now that that's over, I think-- Kappa Kiki: (actually awake, and exited.) Can we talk to Envy now? MiMy: (rubs on envy again.) Master Envy! I have returned with the others! YuYu: (looks like a female greed only with long brown hair.) NO HOGGING THE COOL ONE! (Tackles Envy and fighting ensues.) Kiki: (pushes up glasses and sits down next to Wrath.) Hi, I'm Kiki! Want to go randomly attack Archer with a dull parfait spoon? (Walks over and carries out psychotic attack on the unsuspecting Archer whether he wants to help or not.) Marie: (watches Kiki punch MiMy in the arm before pulling her hair.) As you can see, (watches Envy get trampled and effectively sat on in the argument.) We’ve brought Embers old fan club. They like the homunculi. Deardra: (watches YuYu accidentally punch envy in the face.) Oh... that almost made me feel sorry for him... Veranda: Well, at least the others didn’t show or envy would be getting divided equally among them. Ember: (watching, eating popcorn.) yeah... but Ella showed up he would be locked away... Marie: unfortunately for him, these are the ones that get to dare you Envy. See ya! (Every semi-sane person you know leaves Envy at the Mercy of the fan club.) Kiki: (wipes off spoon and yawns then looks at ranting Alphonse.) Uh... hate to say this Al, but... the Elric Enthralled... Uh... they only like Ed, which is why I only dared HIM. And I know you’re not obsessed with cats... that would be (yawn.) weird. MiMy: (Hugging Envy around the neck in a bear hug.) Oh! I dare Envy give me a hug! YuYu: (hugging Envy at the waist, glaring up at MiMy.) I dare Envy to give me a Glomp! Kiki: you two are... are... MEH! That is what you are! MEH MEHMEHMEHEMHEMEMEH! (Meh-ing continues until both girls have released Envy and are looking at the floor.) Kiki: you finally get to meet Envy, the guy you two have pictures of in your lockers for goodness sake, and you do what? Hmm...? (Silence.) Kiki: Well? YuYu: (bows to Envy.) I apologize for breaking your nose, and jaw... and three of your left fingers... MiMy: (bows next to YuYu.) I apologize for ripping off your shirt... Kiki: AND? MiMy: And hugging you so hard I broke three of your ribs... Kiki: AND? MiMy: and pulling out some hair for my shrine... Kiki: AND? MiMy: and... Wait did I do anything else? Kiki: no idea, I just wanted to see how much you’d confess to... MiMy: (strangling motions to ward Kiki.) I hate you sometimes; you know that, right? Kiki: Yes, yes I do. Now, shall we dare so that the Enthralled can do their bit? YuYu: if we must... (Takes out camera and hands it to Wrath.) I dare you to take as many embarrassing photos of Envy and Ed as you can before next chapter and there might be something extra in it for ya... MiMy: I was serious about that hug though... Wrath Get a shot if he actually hugs me! (Holds out arms.) Kiki: Ah, on to me huh? Thank you to the people who did their dares from last time! MiMy: And Scar... Marie told me what she said about you not speaking that much. She meant you were being a sarcastic little prema-donna; an OOC you would be less prissy. YuYu: Go MiMy! MiMy: I just hate it when someone can’t even get the OOC of a character right! YuYu: Amen sister! Kiki: Have either of you considered that mocking the author of one of Marie and Embers favorite stories might result in Ember being angry and revoking the plan for pen pals? Both: uh... Kiki: didn’t think so... YuYu: but he wouldn’t get mad at them because of us... would he? Kiki: And if he does? MiMy: that means... NO MORE OF THE AWESOME-NESS THAT IS ENVY! (Bursts into tears.) Kiki: uh, I think that's our cue to leave and let the Enthralled do their part... yeah... (The Homunculi fan club leaves, but a medium tall blond wearing a cosplayers uniform walks in and peers around.) Polly: (looks around spots Ed, salutes.) Major Elric! I, Polly Normal, leader of the Elric Enthralled salute you! (Turns to door and opens it) Troops fall in! Julep: (Also in uniform, has his hair in braid similar to Ed’s and salutes with a smirk.) This what they got you doing now Major? Pity... But the colonel seems to be enjoying himself... I'll fix that... Polly: Just introduce yourself already! Geeze... Julep: Fine... (Salutes.) Heliotrope Alchemist, Julep Blood. Nice to meet you sir. (Shakes Ed’s hand then walks over to Roy) You know... you’re getting a lot of special treatment here... I wouldn’t push it. Polly: JULEP! Julep: (Punches Roy in the gut then turns around.) What? Polly: you’re going to make him angry! Julep: And? Polly: Shut up! and let her come inside! Ally: (she comes inside looking apprehensive, her green eyes rove over to Ed and she blushes, backing out of the room.) Polly: Come on sis! (Drags the small brown haired Ally into room by the back of her uniform.) Ally: (blushes as Polly thrusts her in front of Ed. She salutes awkwardly, keeping her eyes on the floor.) Ally Normal, the...(Mumble, mumble.) Alchemist... Polly: Don’t be shy! tell him! Julep: Wait... she actually has a name now? when did she pass? Ally: I passed last week... the furher just hadn’t named me yet... Julep: so what are you? Ally: Everyone’s going to laugh at me! Julep: I might, but I don't think they will. Ally: Alright... (looks up confidently, ignoring the redness in her face.) I, Ally Normal, am the Bubble Alchemist! (Silence, followed by Julep snickering.) Julep: The... Bubble... Alchemist... (laughs hysterically.) Polly: If you saw her alchemy, you wouldn’t laugh. Julep: Then, by all means! give us a demonstration! Ally: I don’t think I should... (looks at her feet again.) Polly: Go ahead Ally! (pushes Envy into on very large open area.) You can use him. Ally: Okay... (Slides on her transmutation Gloves then looks at Envy apologetically.) Sorry, but you’ll have to participate... Julep: Just go already.. miss Bubble... Ally: Shut it Jerk wad! Julep: oh, I'm so scared! (waves his hands and looks around in pretend alarm.) Ally the door mouse is-- Ally: I said-- SHUT UP!! (claps hands and slams them into the floor sending sparks shooting over to Envy, circling him in a circle five feet in diameter. the black sparks shoot up into a bird cage shape around him then the bars expand hiding Envy from view. The cage lifted off the ground and began to condense, forming a round, shining and black Bubble.) Polly: You were saying? Julep: how is he fitting in there? Ally: (Stands and sneers evilly at the rapidly shrinking bubble.) He’s being rapidly condensed; or his flesh is anyway but at a MUCH slower rate than the bubble. I honestly wasn’t interested in letting his bones condense and implode like normal though. Julep: How come you’re only cool when I make you mad? Ally: (watching Envy’s bones start dropping from the now two feet round bubble.) Because if I was angry all the time there would be a lot fewer people around town. Julep: True, true... Polly: (watches Bubble collapse and a headband fall to the ground.) Uh.. aren't we supposed to be daring people? Julep: oh, yeah... Ally: Can I squish envy again? Polly: Maybe next time... Julep: alright, we shall make a list! All: Yes, a list! (five minuets later the following lists were produced.) -Polly’s list- 1.) I dare Ed to put a ‘kick me, I'm lazy’ sign on Roy’s Back. 2.) I dare Roy to leave it there to see how many people actually kick you. 3.) Alphonse... Have some armor polish! (hands him the polish.) 4.) Riza, I dare you to go have a day off! here’s an all-day pass to the most expensive spa in all Amestris! 5.) Havoc, I Dare you to go to my dads ‘quit smoking’ meetings. 6.) Fuery, I Dare you actually get angry at someone, like really, super angry. 7.) Falman, I dare you to open your eyes so we can see what color they are. 8.) Haymans Breda... (laughs evilly.) I dare you to hug den and black hyate long enough for someone to get a camera and take a picture. 9.) Archer, you bring disgrace to the military! Go get crushed in a bubble by my sister! 10.) Armstrong, How many generations of your family HAVE your sparkles been passed down? -Julep’s list- (most, if not all of these are for the bas-- Roy.) 1.) Colonel mustered... if you don’t know what that means you’re dumber than I thought you were! I dare you to wear a sign that says ‘I'm completely useless and I can’t fight worth snot.’ 2.) Colonel idiot, I dare you to bow down and pay homage to Ed for elevating your petty career. 3.) I dare you to give everyone a pay raise. 4.) I dare you to actually do your paperwork, not dump it all on your subordinates. 5.) Dye your hair pink, then shave it all off so when it grows it looks like you have a pink tinted head. 6.) You want mini-skirts? I dare you to work in the woman's section of Wal-mart, you can’t leave to store unless you get at least three phone numbers and slapped ten times. 7.) I Dare Ed to kick Roy... you can choose where. 8.) I Dare Pride/Wrath to Demote Roy and put Ed in charge of him. at least for this note. 9.) I dare Ms. Hawkeye to make sure Ed doesn’t run amuck. I respect the guy, but he’s a little... you know. 10.) I dare Roy to jump off a cliff. He doesn’t have to die, just go cliff diving. -Ally’s list- 1.) Envy, sorry I condensed your flesh inside a bubble of energy but left your bones normal size. wow... that sounded a lot weirder than I thought it would... 2.) I dare Ed... um... to... keep looking awesome! 3.) I dare Al to give me a hug. I don’t know why, I just feel like making someone hug me at the moment... 4.) Roy, if I know Julep his dares are going to really nail you... I dare you to light his coat on fire. Ember and Marie's dad will put it out before anything bad happens anyway... 5.) Riza, here’s a new Browning for you! I built it my self! (hands Riza an awesome newly restored and rebuilt Browning automatic.) 6.) I dare Wrath to... put on Neko ears and pose for a picture. (takes picture.) 7.) I dare every one to take a group picture and make silly faces! -End-lists- Ember: Alright you Military dogs! out! Marie: Ember! Ember: What? We DO have to do something this note... Marie: not the point! (Ed’s fan club leaves, leaving only Marie and Ember.) Ember: Wow... look how much they wrote... Marie: well... Nature, you like sending long ones so.. yeah... Ember: we really need something better to do, never realized how much time we spent on the Pen pals... Marie: You? I don’t know what to do with all the time... Ember: I don’t think they know what we’re talking about... Marie: then he should read the news section on our profile. Ember: That he should! Marie: Have fun with this one Nature, Sunna and the rest! Ember: You’re going to need it... and start spell checking the Notes, it’s hard to read the whole thing if it’s not spelled right. and don’t worry about the words; if they’re wrong the reviewers will say so. Marie: or from us... Ember: right! Marie: See ya guys! Wish us luck for my laptop! it needs it! Marie Blaze, Ember Blaze, Kappa Kiki, MiMy Reis, YuYu Graves, Polly Normal, Ally Normal, Julep Blood, Veranda Gossamer, Deardra Blaze, - Alchemists, Authors, Fan girls, Respectful fans of the military, Archers, And A Vampire Monarch. (P.S: the length is the reason it took so long to review. each did their own so we had to collect then integrate it...but it should give you something to do, huh?) |