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just another fma fan.
2008-08-19
ch 5, anon.
abuseBeuticul work. They are perfect. I can't even pick a favorite. Hmm, after reading your PSAT word story, do you have any new, better adjectives that are synonyms for "brilliant", "awesome" and "wonderful"? I seem to have run out...
a thousand cranes
2008-08-05
ch 5,
abuseUnexpectedly thoughtful. ^^ I dunno why, but the profoundness of this surprised me even though I've read so much of your work.
Sairalinde Inwe
2008-08-04
ch 5,
abuseI really feel for Temari and the Suna in this one. It was deep, well written too... nice work with this
Neon Genesis
2008-08-04
ch 5,
abuseYou're on a roll, aren't you? I could never work up the initiative to write so many things. Of course, I can barely work up the initiative to vacuum, so...

I especially liked this part: This desert, that makes its men into monsters and its women into kunoichi. LOVE IT. Sentence of epic proportions, right there. And the part about Gaara in the cradle both made me squee shamelessly while being very sad. Funny how things work out.
green see-through ghosts
2008-04-02
ch 2,
abusePlease don't tell me they'll all be hopeless! Hinata is the one character in which I find hope. Someday, she might have the power to turn the cold and unfeeling Hyuga clan into something beautiful -- like the garden she wished she had; the ability to cultivate something wonderful. I agree that she wasn't made to be happy as a kunoichi, but I think she can have a purpose in living for the future in which she can make changes.
green see-through ghosts
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseI really like the bit about Neji and Lee. True, true, true, and it makes me smile in the midst of Tenten's hopelessness.
allurement
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is wonderful and I'm so glad you wrote it. Tenten's protrayal is amazingly accurate and Team Gai is so IC it makes me heart ache a little.

It's short, it's simple and to the point; I love it.
.Gabby-chan182.
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseAa, Ten-nee^^ so cool^^

-Gabs.
Calenlass Greenleaf1
2008-03-11
ch 4,
abuseDo you usually only write on the females? I've scanned over some of your Naruto fics, and it seems you usually only write on the females.
Big Fan
2008-03-03
ch 4, anon.
abuseThat was wondeful! It make me quite happy to know
you did Sakura next :] I simply can't get enought of
your wonderful writing! Keep at it!
Big Fan
2008-02-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey, I love your stories. All of them. This one is a favorite, and I really hope that you will do Sakura next (for she is my favorite) Please update soon :]
deathrosekitty
2008-02-08
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis is lovely and so true of Ino.
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