I like this!! :D Especialy with the Rowfyruffs and The Powerpunks!

Not... not bad, it is interesting. I do like it. But for future reference, don't insert author's notes into the prose. One, it's against the rules and two... that was kind of a stupid author's not to interupt with. I'm sorry if I sound harsh, but that's just my opinion.

I WANT THE SEQUEL! Because I'm as demanding as Mordred, really.

*glances around* Does anyone know I'm Sedusa? XD